for Alone6/29/2009 c1 
15Hehe-Blixie
rawr you stole my story name...lol.. really good poem though. I think everyone can relate to it. Most people have been rejected by part of sociaty at least once in their life.
15Hehe-Blixierawr you stole my story name...lol.. really good poem though. I think everyone can relate to it. Most people have been rejected by part of sociaty at least once in their life.
2/18/2009 c1 29Kini Takohashi
I wanted to read some of your work and give you a review as a thanks for giving me one. I used to be so popular here :( stupid writer's block! Anyway. I don't read a lot of poetry, but I really enjoyed this poem! I love how so many of us can relate to that "cold abyss that is loneliness." The format of your poem was also very artistic, in the sense the lines seemed balanced and symmetrical. I'd like to read more of your work in the future :)
29Kini TakohashiI wanted to read some of your work and give you a review as a thanks for giving me one. I used to be so popular here :( stupid writer's block! Anyway. I don't read a lot of poetry, but I really enjoyed this poem! I love how so many of us can relate to that "cold abyss that is loneliness." The format of your poem was also very artistic, in the sense the lines seemed balanced and symmetrical. I'd like to read more of your work in the future :)