for The story of a boy who was swallowed by a tree1/22/2009 c1 ilovedustfinger
This was the first story I've read here for a long time that was actually worth reading. I liked it a lot. It could benefit from some editing, but couldn't everything? The picture it painted was really something, though. Just, you know, touch up on a couple sentences, lots of it could be written better, so you do the premise of it more justice.
Thanks for the image, though.
This was the first story I've read here for a long time that was actually worth reading. I liked it a lot. It could benefit from some editing, but couldn't everything? The picture it painted was really something, though. Just, you know, touch up on a couple sentences, lots of it could be written better, so you do the premise of it more justice.
Thanks for the image, though.
1/22/2009 c1 
1World Theorist
That was unfortunate. I seriously hoping this fiction had another chapter, but then I just realized it was complete. My rating is a 4/5. Good Work.
1World TheoristThat was unfortunate. I seriously hoping this fiction had another chapter, but then I just realized it was complete. My rating is a 4/5. Good Work.