for Stuck with annoyance2/8/2009 c1 
612simpleplan13
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"That you wish you can wipe them off of the face of earth"... could wipe
"So I must hold and with-hold this pain"...withhold
"If only doing it was easy as it is said"... if only doing it was easy as saying it sounds better keeping the tenses the same
"Than maybe I wouldn’t be writing this"...Then
"Of my life and who I’m stuck with"...whom
I really liked the first line and the last one. In the first one irritants was a great word choice. The ending was really interesting because it added a while new element to the piece with this new girl being introduced. The rest of it was ok, but don't forget to edit.
612simpleplan13Fellow RGer you should join the Review Marathon (link in my profile)!
"That you wish you can wipe them off of the face of earth"... could wipe
"So I must hold and with-hold this pain"...withhold
"If only doing it was easy as it is said"... if only doing it was easy as saying it sounds better keeping the tenses the same
"Than maybe I wouldn’t be writing this"...Then
"Of my life and who I’m stuck with"...whom
I really liked the first line and the last one. In the first one irritants was a great word choice. The ending was really interesting because it added a while new element to the piece with this new girl being introduced. The rest of it was ok, but don't forget to edit.