11/17/2011 c2 2NormaJean Beausoleil
great job! it all feels a little rushed, like it could be expanded to something much larger, but the characters are intriguing and pleasant. and the mysterious plots are fantastically entertaining. thanks for sharing!
great job! it all feels a little rushed, like it could be expanded to something much larger, but the characters are intriguing and pleasant. and the mysterious plots are fantastically entertaining. thanks for sharing!
2/2/2009 c1 5Sanguineus
So cute. I love it.
Wait...is that a nosebleed coming. Never had one before...
So cute. I love it.
Wait...is that a nosebleed coming. Never had one before...
1/31/2009 c1 5Shikokudarkstar
I love it. It was a little bit much at once; I would have liked it to have been split into two chapters so it doesn't seem so monsterous in size, but that's just my opinion. XD But I loved your story. It was great along with your characters. I hope to read more of your writing again sometime soon. XD
~Shik
I love it. It was a little bit much at once; I would have liked it to have been split into two chapters so it doesn't seem so monsterous in size, but that's just my opinion. XD But I loved your story. It was great along with your characters. I hope to read more of your writing again sometime soon. XD
~Shik
1/24/2009 c1 25SweetPseudonym
The perfect fairytale ending for the perfect fairytale! What an amazingly romantic and heroic story-I really enjoyed reading it! It painted such a beautiful picture in my head. I'm a little sad that it's a oneshot, but I think it was a perfect story for the length it had. Looking forward to more!
The perfect fairytale ending for the perfect fairytale! What an amazingly romantic and heroic story-I really enjoyed reading it! It painted such a beautiful picture in my head. I'm a little sad that it's a oneshot, but I think it was a perfect story for the length it had. Looking forward to more!