3/14/2009 c11 russetwolflover
YAY! She's ACTUALLY happy!

3/6/2009 c10 Priscilla Shay
oh, darn...five years and we still don't know what she got him! Lol, I thought we were finally going ot find out...but good job :)

Lol, I can't believe they lied to him like that. But, omg, I think I'd be even more hurt for JACK if he ever found out that they said he died lol...

*sigh*

~P.S.

3/2/2009 c5 4Priscilla Shay
so...she and david have been together for..almost 3yrs? and they haven't - as lindsey put it- 'done it' yet? Even though they live together or was she just saying that to her dad?

:)

~P.S.

3/1/2009 c9 Priscilla Shay
hi

ok, i love the story, it kinda killed me that you were spilting it lol, i was sad at the end of the first one, but now it's continuing ..yay! and Jack is such an awesome dad :)

But..quick questions...

is the action going to pick up soon? I get the flow of the story, and i like the different perspectives..but i was just wondering..(not trying to be rude or anything)

Andy is so cute! But for some reason i thought he was older than 7...prolly just my head,

And...um..ok..before..Lindsey and David had to fly in for her birthday, then they had to fly back out...so how come she was able to just go home and help her mom like that? With david there, if he's such a workaholic?

And...I think that's it, there are a few grammatical and spelling errors, but good job :) keep updating!

~P.S.

2/24/2009 c8 citygrl
ask for a review and you shall receive. my biggest thoughts on this chapter: it ended in a slightly weird way. generally, i feel like everything is moving a bit slow but that's probably because i'm impatient waiting for what i want to happen to happen;) looking forward to more!

1/24/2009 c1 Jordyanne
i love this story! you have to write more and fast!

1/23/2009 c5 5Somedaymydreamswillcome
Oh I love how this is going!

Sad that she has a boyfriend, but am I sensing that maybe there's some tension between them in the topic of religion?