for The Howling Caves of Tresilian Bay1/13/2010 c14 
14eskimoxisses
Another good story.
Your chapters are rather short,
but well-written.
I noticed something that you did similarly in Isis,
you made Percy and Erasmus 'giggle'!
...do men giggle; i assumed they chuckled!
anyways, thanks for bringing this to fictionpress :)
14eskimoxissesAnother good story.
Your chapters are rather short,
but well-written.
I noticed something that you did similarly in Isis,
you made Percy and Erasmus 'giggle'!
...do men giggle; i assumed they chuckled!
anyways, thanks for bringing this to fictionpress :)
8/21/2009 c2 Ipaintwithwords
Oh oh...
I love the description of Anne's sneaking around at night, the geography, lovely.
But you do know what they say about curiosity...
Oh oh...
I love the description of Anne's sneaking around at night, the geography, lovely.
But you do know what they say about curiosity...
8/21/2009 c1 Ipaintwithwords
Hm...I can't help but wonder what this Edward is up to in the middle of the night...
Good beginning, glad I found this story
Hm...I can't help but wonder what this Edward is up to in the middle of the night...
Good beginning, glad I found this story
7/9/2009 c14 19Le Cosmonaute
What a fascinating story! I read it all in a half hour, it was so absorbing. Very well-written, too. I love the mysterious ending and how your language really fit with the time period while staying fresh comfortable to read. Great work!
19Le CosmonauteWhat a fascinating story! I read it all in a half hour, it was so absorbing. Very well-written, too. I love the mysterious ending and how your language really fit with the time period while staying fresh comfortable to read. Great work!
7/7/2009 c14 8CrazyCowgirl101
So sad! But i think i was expecting it :(( Great job, i really like what you have done. Your style for this piece was very good. This is one of my favorites.
8CrazyCowgirl101So sad! But i think i was expecting it :(( Great job, i really like what you have done. Your style for this piece was very good. This is one of my favorites.
7/7/2009 c5 CrazyCowgirl101
AH! I love how you don't stray from the correction diction of the time period! So many ppl do that an dit bugs me to no end. I like Erasmus, he's persistant, but seems a gentleman, though he it doesn't seem like he has a gentlemans intentions in mind. Good job. This is very addictiong ;) I also like YOUR choice of diction. You use words that are, or seem, to be common of the 1600s.
AH! I love how you don't stray from the correction diction of the time period! So many ppl do that an dit bugs me to no end. I like Erasmus, he's persistant, but seems a gentleman, though he it doesn't seem like he has a gentlemans intentions in mind. Good job. This is very addictiong ;) I also like YOUR choice of diction. You use words that are, or seem, to be common of the 1600s.
7/7/2009 c3 CrazyCowgirl101
:O! Can't wait to read more. I like Mr. Tripp. Very interesting name, is it factual, or fictional?
:O! Can't wait to read more. I like Mr. Tripp. Very interesting name, is it factual, or fictional?