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8CrazyCowgirl101
I like this so far. Very interesting. I especially like the fact that it is based on a "true" story, and that there is not line between fiction and non-fiction. It really gives you something to think about!
8CrazyCowgirl101I like this so far. Very interesting. I especially like the fact that it is based on a "true" story, and that there is not line between fiction and non-fiction. It really gives you something to think about!
5/5/2009 c14 2amberislost
Excellent work! Loved the epilogue! It was a great way to end the story! I will be surely be reading more of your work in the future!
2amberislostExcellent work! Loved the epilogue! It was a great way to end the story! I will be surely be reading more of your work in the future!
5/3/2009 c14 2S. J. Komza
A very heartbreaking ending, but the story is so fascinating, that I'd like to visit St Donats myself one day. And I suppose you're implying, in the epilogue, that Lord Stradling killed Erasmus? That would not be very surprising... in any case, what a read! Great work, and I encourage you to keep on writing - you're a talented story-teller, and hopefully you'll publish someday.
A. Scott
2S. J. KomzaA very heartbreaking ending, but the story is so fascinating, that I'd like to visit St Donats myself one day. And I suppose you're implying, in the epilogue, that Lord Stradling killed Erasmus? That would not be very surprising... in any case, what a read! Great work, and I encourage you to keep on writing - you're a talented story-teller, and hopefully you'll publish someday.
A. Scott
5/3/2009 c12 S. J. Komza
Well then. That was a very.. intense encounter between Anne and Erasmus. It's a good thing, though, that you didn't make it too graphic. Some authors tend to go too much into detail and it ends up being downright unbearable. Great work though, I can't wait to read the rest!
A. Scott
Well then. That was a very.. intense encounter between Anne and Erasmus. It's a good thing, though, that you didn't make it too graphic. Some authors tend to go too much into detail and it ends up being downright unbearable. Great work though, I can't wait to read the rest!
A. Scott
4/27/2009 c4 S. J. Komza
Another great chapter - but isn't, "roared gently," a bit contradictory? There is flow in your writing, though I have noticed some grammatical errors - which, I must add, don't disrupt your pace, but it would do well to be more attentive to them. In any case, I enjoyed it very much, and expect more reviews from me!
-A. Scott
Another great chapter - but isn't, "roared gently," a bit contradictory? There is flow in your writing, though I have noticed some grammatical errors - which, I must add, don't disrupt your pace, but it would do well to be more attentive to them. In any case, I enjoyed it very much, and expect more reviews from me!
-A. Scott
4/25/2009 c2 S. J. Komza
This story savours strongly of Ann Radcliffe's 'Mysteries of Udolpho.' I only mean to say that the setting is very like the one in that particular book. It's eerie, enchanting, and yet very real. Good job with the story, and the language and style are similarly strong and original. I like Anne, but perhaps you should write more on her character... At all events, keep up the good work!
-A. Scott
This story savours strongly of Ann Radcliffe's 'Mysteries of Udolpho.' I only mean to say that the setting is very like the one in that particular book. It's eerie, enchanting, and yet very real. Good job with the story, and the language and style are similarly strong and original. I like Anne, but perhaps you should write more on her character... At all events, keep up the good work!
-A. Scott
4/16/2009 c14 IheartStewart20
I LOVED THIS!
This story was amazing! I can't wait for your next story!
I LOVED THIS!
This story was amazing! I can't wait for your next story!
4/15/2009 c14 1SingingBird812
This was a fascinating story! I really liked how you put the epilogue in there; it made the whole thing so mysterious! Thanks for writing it. :)
1SingingBird812This was a fascinating story! I really liked how you put the epilogue in there; it made the whole thing so mysterious! Thanks for writing it. :)
4/15/2009 c14 2Millilicious
He never came?
Oh, how beautiful that was. And I love how it was based on history, and the epilogue was everything it should have been. Well done to you for creating such a wonderful story. I loved every word.
Mil :-)
2MilliliciousHe never came?
Oh, how beautiful that was. And I love how it was based on history, and the epilogue was everything it should have been. Well done to you for creating such a wonderful story. I loved every word.
Mil :-)
4/15/2009 c13 Millilicious
*Gasps*
Something romantically tragic is going to happen, I can feel it in my bones.
But fingers crossed it won't. Chapter Fourteen calls and I'm really really excited!
*Breathes deeply*
O.K. Moving on.
Mil :-)
*Gasps*
Something romantically tragic is going to happen, I can feel it in my bones.
But fingers crossed it won't. Chapter Fourteen calls and I'm really really excited!
*Breathes deeply*
O.K. Moving on.
Mil :-)
4/15/2009 c12 Millilicious
I can't decide if I'm shocked or very very happy...
You just have everything so in balance and RIGHT. I love this story. If its not in my favourites, its being put there now!
On to Chapter 13...
Mil :-D
I can't decide if I'm shocked or very very happy...
You just have everything so in balance and RIGHT. I love this story. If its not in my favourites, its being put there now!
On to Chapter 13...
Mil :-D
4/15/2009 c11 Millilicious
Oh. Things got a little steamy there.
And I loved every minute of it, haha.
I think the next chapter is a'calling...
Mil :-)
Oh. Things got a little steamy there.
And I loved every minute of it, haha.
I think the next chapter is a'calling...
Mil :-)
4/15/2009 c10 Millilicious
*Sighs*
I love your writing style. It's poetic but not too in your face and sickly. It's perfect.
And yay! Erasmus is back. I missed him, even if he was gone less than a chapter.
Mil ;-)
*Sighs*
I love your writing style. It's poetic but not too in your face and sickly. It's perfect.
And yay! Erasmus is back. I missed him, even if he was gone less than a chapter.
Mil ;-)
4/15/2009 c14 zagato
Wow! Thank you for finishing. You combined the many tales very seamlessly into one great story. It seems to me that Sir Edward killed Erasmus. I tried to look in the web for the local folklore but like your version better. Please send me photos, I will give my email address in a message. Thank you again and please write more.
Wow! Thank you for finishing. You combined the many tales very seamlessly into one great story. It seems to me that Sir Edward killed Erasmus. I tried to look in the web for the local folklore but like your version better. Please send me photos, I will give my email address in a message. Thank you again and please write more.