12/23/2009 c1 xrolipolix
Awesome chapter! I like the balance of description, feelings and emotions and dialogue! I'll admit, though, I got a bit confused as to who was talking around the 'Horse man son' bit. But, then again, I'm a terrible reader. Interesting! I like it! Shall continue! :D

3/22/2009 c2 jamie
wow. You are a great writer. Keep it comming, next chapter please! Dont listen to anyone who raggs on you they are so just stupid and wish they could write better. Keep writing

3/2/2009 c5 2Ray-Anne
Poor thing. =(

The man shounds very nice, a bit ...perfect though.

2/2/2009 c2 2Inuaka
can't wait to read more, keep it comming.