for Perfection4/6/2010 c1 
10CassandraStacy
I think this is very well-written. Is it a one-shot or are you planning on adding more to it? I especially enjoyed the picture of Jess riding to school on a little pink bike. With STREAMERS no less. He heh. I hate getting to class late . . . although it happens often for my morning classes. But even those two to five minutes late makes me feel guilty!
Cassandra
10CassandraStacyI think this is very well-written. Is it a one-shot or are you planning on adding more to it? I especially enjoyed the picture of Jess riding to school on a little pink bike. With STREAMERS no less. He heh. I hate getting to class late . . . although it happens often for my morning classes. But even those two to five minutes late makes me feel guilty!
Cassandra
9/6/2009 c1 2BreeJalil
Hey, lol, so I maxed out my PM limit for today, damn it!
so here I am.
sweet lovin? gah, BORING. I'll see what I can do...
2BreeJalilHey, lol, so I maxed out my PM limit for today, damn it!
so here I am.
sweet lovin? gah, BORING. I'll see what I can do...
4/19/2009 c1 alwaysautumn
Hey!
Great start! Oh and I love Veronica :) I think I have her sister's in the garage...haha. Oh and I completely agree Modern trumps Ancient ANY day!
Interesting twist you've got going there. I've got to say I'm guilty of not reading the little summary before I started reading, I was browsing as you do XD LOL- so yeah the last line was a clincher :) Bravo. i'm not sure if it's considered a cliff hanger, but I definitely want to read more! This isn't a one shot is it? O.o... Ok. Checked. it's not...kind of... but YAY! ! ! ! :D So.. I'm hoping this isn't premature- but I'm seeing two outcomes here. Option a) this is a very interesting slash- because your main character sounds like a girl...
Which leads me to Option b)
I do believed you've just a classic twelfth night/she's the man/ Hana-kimi (hehe yes I read your profile) on us :) That being said I tihnk you're very brave. I haven't began on this cliche...yet. However, it would make quite a lot of sense- pertaining to the main characters thoguhts. Though I've got to say, you didn't leave me with a lot of hints there. The name Jess is pretty metro, isn't it?
Anyways~ Terribly sorry for this very long/ slightly random review (I have a terrible rambling/babbling habit when I write)
I should stop writing and stuffing on around FP- I have so much homework glaring at me right now XD
I really do want to read more~ So keep posting!
x reeka
Hey!
Great start! Oh and I love Veronica :) I think I have her sister's in the garage...haha. Oh and I completely agree Modern trumps Ancient ANY day!
Interesting twist you've got going there. I've got to say I'm guilty of not reading the little summary before I started reading, I was browsing as you do XD LOL- so yeah the last line was a clincher :) Bravo. i'm not sure if it's considered a cliff hanger, but I definitely want to read more! This isn't a one shot is it? O.o... Ok. Checked. it's not...kind of... but YAY! ! ! ! :D So.. I'm hoping this isn't premature- but I'm seeing two outcomes here. Option a) this is a very interesting slash- because your main character sounds like a girl...
Which leads me to Option b)
I do believed you've just a classic twelfth night/she's the man/ Hana-kimi (hehe yes I read your profile) on us :) That being said I tihnk you're very brave. I haven't began on this cliche...yet. However, it would make quite a lot of sense- pertaining to the main characters thoguhts. Though I've got to say, you didn't leave me with a lot of hints there. The name Jess is pretty metro, isn't it?
Anyways~ Terribly sorry for this very long/ slightly random review (I have a terrible rambling/babbling habit when I write)
I should stop writing and stuffing on around FP- I have so much homework glaring at me right now XD
I really do want to read more~ So keep posting!
x reeka