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for they all call her alaska

3/27/2011 c1 478speakeasy-love
i like the bite in this. it all had a very natural flow, and a very biting tone.

very well done.
1/29/2009 c1 14CreativeEdge
loved it. I really did, I love the tone to the piece, it's in your face but there's a lot of nice subtleties to the writing itself, and the references work really well =)
1/29/2009 c1 GoodbyeDeleteThisPage
I've missed you.

This is heavy with knowing, the edge of ugly, "sticky, red, hard candy." Somewhat uncomfortable. This girl is eating the other apart, but in such poetic terms and though it may be suffering, one sadistically would like to follow through and see how fucked up one can be.

trying to hard to live like thompson and kerouac and lou reed, succeeding but without the support of a nation, alone. A fast fading star no one watched as it streaked across the sky.

"you're just an arsonist's fit,

trying to break the fucking ice"

Oh, haven't we all been there?

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