for Natalie7/20/2011 c1 
3happymango
Hi Elizabeth!
I just started reading your story and I love the way you write your sentences. It's detailed but not overly wordy. I'm curious to see Allan develop his relationship with Natalie. I'll continue to read the rest of the chapters you have up! :)
3happymangoHi Elizabeth!
I just started reading your story and I love the way you write your sentences. It's detailed but not overly wordy. I'm curious to see Allan develop his relationship with Natalie. I'll continue to read the rest of the chapters you have up! :)
9/6/2010 c7 2MapleSyrup
Oh wow... that was weird, the girl is just stupid... picking on her like that. Nice chapter :)
2MapleSyrupOh wow... that was weird, the girl is just stupid... picking on her like that. Nice chapter :)
9/4/2010 c1 2MapleSyrup
I will continue reading tomorrow :)
It sounds very much like the kind of stuff I like reading :3
And bribes are fun. And I'd love a review XD
2MapleSyrupI will continue reading tomorrow :)
It sounds very much like the kind of stuff I like reading :3
And bribes are fun. And I'd love a review XD
8/19/2010 c19 Whitewolf Vamp
lol sucks that it stops here i cant wait for ur next update love ur story its great :)
lol sucks that it stops here i cant wait for ur next update love ur story its great :)
4/6/2010 c18 30Waitingnotsopatiently
Aw! I love this! Jacob seems so sweet. It's nice to see that she's finally trusting people. :)
30WaitingnotsopatientlyAw! I love this! Jacob seems so sweet. It's nice to see that she's finally trusting people. :)
4/6/2010 c18 4Paige Lynn Porter
Hello! I have been waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting for this! I got really excited to see the notification!
I like this chapter. I love that Natalie is adjusting and that she is realizing that she can eventually move on. I love that you actually said the word "eventually" when she was thinking about being with someone else. It shows how real the stuff she's been through is to her still.
I was a little confused about the Paige and Darren part. I understand what it was about but it just seemed a little out of place given the content before and after.
And I just want to give Aiden a hug.
4Paige Lynn PorterHello! I have been waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting for this! I got really excited to see the notification!
I like this chapter. I love that Natalie is adjusting and that she is realizing that she can eventually move on. I love that you actually said the word "eventually" when she was thinking about being with someone else. It shows how real the stuff she's been through is to her still.
I was a little confused about the Paige and Darren part. I understand what it was about but it just seemed a little out of place given the content before and after.
And I just want to give Aiden a hug.
3/19/2010 c17 Binenthorne
like another reader said, I'm suspicious about this Jacob character...hm, wonder whats gunna happen next?
=)
like another reader said, I'm suspicious about this Jacob character...hm, wonder whats gunna happen next?
=)
2/9/2010 c17 Paige Lynn Porter
Hm...
I like it.
I'm a little suspicious of Jacob. It's good that Natalie is making friends and going out with them, but I feel that Jacob might do something that may scare or upset Natalie by accident...I dunno...
And I'm a little worried about Aidan...make that Alot worried about Aidan...
But it's wonderful!
:)
Hm...
I like it.
I'm a little suspicious of Jacob. It's good that Natalie is making friends and going out with them, but I feel that Jacob might do something that may scare or upset Natalie by accident...I dunno...
And I'm a little worried about Aidan...make that Alot worried about Aidan...
But it's wonderful!
:)