for A Night in Palestine2/9/2009 c1 
836CRaZy-OdIN
Very moving. But ofcourse I'd expect no less from you. Truely an abominal subject indeed.
p.s. sorry I havent reviewed in ages.
836CRaZy-OdINVery moving. But ofcourse I'd expect no less from you. Truely an abominal subject indeed.
p.s. sorry I havent reviewed in ages.
2/2/2009 c1 najat
wow! the poem is reli gud n very emotional and touching, good work
wow! the poem is reli gud n very emotional and touching, good work
2/2/2009 c1 270queenvixta
Beautiful poem. Very well written. Really emotional. A very beautiful tribute. Well done.
~Vikki x
270queenvixtaBeautiful poem. Very well written. Really emotional. A very beautiful tribute. Well done.
~Vikki x
1/30/2009 c1 23Jem the writer
This is very emotionally written, and the snippets of the other language managed to fit in perfectly with the poem.
The meter of the poem seemed a little off balance in some of the stanzas.
Other than that, the emotion was very well written with this and you chose perfect words for such a tragic event.
Keep up the good work,
~JEM~
23Jem the writerThis is very emotionally written, and the snippets of the other language managed to fit in perfectly with the poem.
The meter of the poem seemed a little off balance in some of the stanzas.
Other than that, the emotion was very well written with this and you chose perfect words for such a tragic event.
Keep up the good work,
~JEM~
1/30/2009 c1 Spurlunk
I like this poem. You've captured a mood and a place perfectly, though sadly the time period could be almost anytime in the last fifty years.
I like this poem. You've captured a mood and a place perfectly, though sadly the time period could be almost anytime in the last fifty years.