9/9/2011 c1 Tatiana
So I was never into the whole slash thing. Then my gay friend demanded I read this particular story. He said, "but Taaaaaaatiiiiii, it's soooooo hot!" now imagine that in a feminie gay fourteen-year-old voice. So yeah, it IS pretty hot. Quite a few grammatical errors, though.

-Tatiana, the extremely critical story critic

6/25/2011 c1 3Not Abigale
Lmao, wow that awesome, hope u continue to write over stories

7/19/2009 c1 4Craving No Mercy
Very well written with really likeable characters =]

-Craving No Mercy

2/11/2009 c1 Elli Fay
Lol, nice comment with the Edward and Jacob thing. the story was really good to =D

1/31/2009 c1 45Jessicuh
I really liked this story! It was great!