
6/19/2012 c1
5The Infinity
This is one of my favorite stories ever.
I love the details and imagery of Sheva's clothing and appearance, it gives the story a poetic edge.
I love the fight for dominance between both of them. (Who doesn't love some great, gay smut?)
I love the feelings they just discover that have been there for a long time.
I wish it never ended!
Much love,
Lil' Monster

This is one of my favorite stories ever.
I love the details and imagery of Sheva's clothing and appearance, it gives the story a poetic edge.
I love the fight for dominance between both of them. (Who doesn't love some great, gay smut?)
I love the feelings they just discover that have been there for a long time.
I wish it never ended!
Much love,
Lil' Monster
11/3/2010 c1 jayanx
It always amazes me how much story a good writer can pack into one of these one shots. This one gave me such a clear idea of who the characters were without ever really coming out and decribing them, and I love that.
It always amazes me how much story a good writer can pack into one of these one shots. This one gave me such a clear idea of who the characters were without ever really coming out and decribing them, and I love that.
1/30/2010 c1 Shalimar148
I think I held my breath through the whole story. If you ever want to expand it, more background on the narrator would be good. Really liked it.
I think I held my breath through the whole story. If you ever want to expand it, more background on the narrator would be good. Really liked it.
10/24/2009 c1
7Sunshine Bear
Whose your daddy now, bitch?
I thought one of them was going to say that...
They didn't.
I felt cheated.
I'm over it now though.

Whose your daddy now, bitch?
I thought one of them was going to say that...
They didn't.
I felt cheated.
I'm over it now though.
6/2/2009 c1 Sunny
I like this! : D
oh so very different.
The characters were terribly amusing.
Oh and also:
brownie points for using the name Sheva.
I like this! : D
oh so very different.
The characters were terribly amusing.
Oh and also:
brownie points for using the name Sheva.
5/9/2009 c1
6FXRG
That was really, really hot. Gotta love the hate/love thing :3 And I like the dynamic of their relationship, especially the struggle for control. Yum.

That was really, really hot. Gotta love the hate/love thing :3 And I like the dynamic of their relationship, especially the struggle for control. Yum.
2/2/2009 c1 koerle
Great story, really! I think this story is hot and sweet at the same time. Or should I say intriguing?
This really was an enjoyable read!
Great story, really! I think this story is hot and sweet at the same time. Or should I say intriguing?
This really was an enjoyable read!