for Not For Me2/19/2011 c22 melimarie
You are an amazing writer! I could not stop reading "Not For Me", and started it as soon as i finished "They call it Karma". Keep writing, it helps me procrastinate ;)
You are an amazing writer! I could not stop reading "Not For Me", and started it as soon as i finished "They call it Karma". Keep writing, it helps me procrastinate ;)
1/19/2011 c18 charmedblush
Greeter! It's so annoying! Whenever the guy goes after the girl after their fight and tries to explain his feelings the guy always becomes deterred by something! Argh!
Anyhoo I still love it. This type of romance is my favourite, a teen romance with a cliche twist.
(is it wrong of me to prefer cliche romance than nitty gritty friend romance? Is that just me?)
Ps. Leigh. Creeps. Me. Out. However in this chappie when he referred to her in certain ways I growled. Also certain terms in which go away was phrased less delicately may have been emitted.
However we always need the villain and I still absolutely love your story
Greeter! It's so annoying! Whenever the guy goes after the girl after their fight and tries to explain his feelings the guy always becomes deterred by something! Argh!
Anyhoo I still love it. This type of romance is my favourite, a teen romance with a cliche twist.
(is it wrong of me to prefer cliche romance than nitty gritty friend romance? Is that just me?)
Ps. Leigh. Creeps. Me. Out. However in this chappie when he referred to her in certain ways I growled. Also certain terms in which go away was phrased less delicately may have been emitted.
However we always need the villain and I still absolutely love your story
1/19/2011 c17 charmedblush
HE BROKE THe RULE TOO! YOu OBLIVIOUS GIRL!
Sorry got ahead of myself there. Really really enjoy the story.
Leigh absolutely freaks me out though.
Can't wait to read on, just had to interject there.
HE BROKE THe RULE TOO! YOu OBLIVIOUS GIRL!
Sorry got ahead of myself there. Really really enjoy the story.
Leigh absolutely freaks me out though.
Can't wait to read on, just had to interject there.
3/18/2010 c22 
3AJS
Hmm I think in terms of couples, I liked Essa & Creston better together, but in terms of stories I liked this one better. Haha not sure how that works, but it might be because I feel like Essa & Creston really did seem better suited for one another. I mean I guess that Aura & Tynan were both nice people... although sometimes their personalities seemed a little inconsistent. Like I thought that Aura was good at hiding her feelings from other people? But then suddenly she wasn't and she sucked at lying and everything.
Good story I agree. I didn't like how James suddenly just disappeared it was kind of weird and abrupt, especially that Leigh's attempts to drive him out of the picture actually worked, but I don't really see how Leigh could have predicted that James would be sent to some other city for treatment either. I also feel like Essa just kind of appeared and disappeared and then appeared again in this story, which seemed a bit inconsistent since she really was supposed to be a character who was there all along.
I like the ending. I really do liked Aura & Tynan together. I'm glad that he came to his senses and realized how repulsing Mali was and how much he actually did care for Aura. I think maybe something more in the end though to kind of secure all her insecurities would have been nice though. Like some kind of contrast between before when she was never really sure if his actions were real or not, and now she was. It would have made everything come to a nice circle, I guess.
I like the ending. Haha, I like James' character a lot. And Tynan's too, though he did seem a bit different between this story and the last, but I guess that would probably be due to the different perspectives and also the fact that he's matured and grown up a bit.
Good job on this story. I can definitely see the improvement, and congrats on winning SkoW! I am definitely going to miss Aura & Tynan. :) They DO make a cute couple, though I wonder if they still bicker like they used to, haha.
- Alyssa
3AJSHmm I think in terms of couples, I liked Essa & Creston better together, but in terms of stories I liked this one better. Haha not sure how that works, but it might be because I feel like Essa & Creston really did seem better suited for one another. I mean I guess that Aura & Tynan were both nice people... although sometimes their personalities seemed a little inconsistent. Like I thought that Aura was good at hiding her feelings from other people? But then suddenly she wasn't and she sucked at lying and everything.
Good story I agree. I didn't like how James suddenly just disappeared it was kind of weird and abrupt, especially that Leigh's attempts to drive him out of the picture actually worked, but I don't really see how Leigh could have predicted that James would be sent to some other city for treatment either. I also feel like Essa just kind of appeared and disappeared and then appeared again in this story, which seemed a bit inconsistent since she really was supposed to be a character who was there all along.
I like the ending. I really do liked Aura & Tynan together. I'm glad that he came to his senses and realized how repulsing Mali was and how much he actually did care for Aura. I think maybe something more in the end though to kind of secure all her insecurities would have been nice though. Like some kind of contrast between before when she was never really sure if his actions were real or not, and now she was. It would have made everything come to a nice circle, I guess.
I like the ending. Haha, I like James' character a lot. And Tynan's too, though he did seem a bit different between this story and the last, but I guess that would probably be due to the different perspectives and also the fact that he's matured and grown up a bit.
Good job on this story. I can definitely see the improvement, and congrats on winning SkoW! I am definitely going to miss Aura & Tynan. :) They DO make a cute couple, though I wonder if they still bicker like they used to, haha.
- Alyssa
3/12/2010 c13 Aradia Cloud
I will KILL leigh. I'll murder him. I don't like him at all. I'm almost in tears right now. Poor James!
I will KILL leigh. I'll murder him. I don't like him at all. I'm almost in tears right now. Poor James!
2/12/2010 c22 1KarmaC
Every overly girly bone in my body is sighing in contentment! Such a great story. You may have used a cliche, but man did you use it well! I fell entirely in love with Tynan and I wanted to be Aurellia SO badly. Great, amazing, too many good adjectives to keep going!
1KarmaCEvery overly girly bone in my body is sighing in contentment! Such a great story. You may have used a cliche, but man did you use it well! I fell entirely in love with Tynan and I wanted to be Aurellia SO badly. Great, amazing, too many good adjectives to keep going!
2/3/2010 c22 GinzzzRoxxx
I absolutely adored this story :) it was awesoome. Now onto your other stories, hopefully you have some :P
(ps: I'm pretty sure you mean "discomfort" instead of "discomfit")
Thanks for being an awesome author :)
I absolutely adored this story :) it was awesoome. Now onto your other stories, hopefully you have some :P
(ps: I'm pretty sure you mean "discomfort" instead of "discomfit")
Thanks for being an awesome author :)
1/26/2010 c9 2Skyterra
I'm sorry... but Leigh is SO CREEPY. That's probably the point though, but he scares me so much!
2SkyterraI'm sorry... but Leigh is SO CREEPY. That's probably the point though, but he scares me so much!
1/15/2010 c22 DA-chen1
Wow, really really really lovely and interesting story of yours!
Such an amazing thing to read... :-)
Well done! I hope, you will write another good story some day!
DA-chen
Wow, really really really lovely and interesting story of yours!
Such an amazing thing to read... :-)
Well done! I hope, you will write another good story some day!
DA-chen