8/17/2009 c20 samora
omg you still delayed them getting tgether i knew he would save the day i love tynan i want one of him in my life.

i hope he bashes and beats the crap out of leigh he's so freaky. then i hope creston comes in and kicks leigh just for the heck of it lol.

anyways great chapter and kind of a cliffy too i love it.

8/17/2009 c20 xxo
SO SWET

ily chris!

8/17/2009 c20 pinkeclipse
i hope chris is able to get them out of there!

8/17/2009 c20 JZK
Omg! i want more. how are they going to get out leigh is practially almost to the door. this is so dramatic - i cant wait to read more

8/17/2009 c20 10Kaleigh Windelynn
In the famous words of Scooby-Doo..."RUH ROH!"

Amazing chapter again. It made me feel a bit better to sit here and read it ... stupid sickly feeling.

Can't wait to read another chapter...But I am gonna guess that there aren't many more chapters left, eh? :-(

8/17/2009 c19 SparklingStar25
hey and also, congradulations 4 the award!

8/17/2009 c20 alwaysautumn
Hey :)

O-o-O-o-O-o-O-o-O-o-O-o

That ending was cliffhanger-ish. 'Ish' because Tynan was there ;) and that makes things in 'Not-For-Me-Land' a little more optimistic.

Realistic portrayal of Aura's waking up. People are really out of it when they regain consciousness.

Screw that little... oh, I just know karma is going to do a number or his aarse. He messed with her car, if that doesn't spell a being of a very painful, painful downfall I don't know what does.

Ew. Gross. What a sadist. And to think he 'rescued' his mother and sister, only to turn into the monster he despised. Ohh the irony. And screw genetics, its psychological. Genetics is a pitiful excuse for his behavioural problems, almost synonymous with the 'but he made me do it' and the 'yes sir, the dog really did ate my homework'. Bloody psychopath.

I think Leigh got all antsy with the 'But I thought you were my friend'((.. I don't know why but I was suddenly reminded me of the distinctly melodramatic voices and terrible acting of the Bold and the Beautiful. Not so say that you're writing is like that. It's just I might have heard this line before...))

- Right, back to your story- antsy- because I think deep down in his sorry excuse of his most vital organ, his heart *cough* lump of coal *cough*... he likes Aura is some weird, twisted way. And therefore is just plain jealous of Tynan, and hates the fact that he (and the rest of the world knows) that he never had a chance with Aura.

That sick bathtub (have you seen Josie and the Pussy Cats recently? if you have/remember think back to the crazy lady with the 'lisp')

Now really, he's just gloating and trying to get a reaction out of Aura to feed his own sick little fantasies in his head. What a fruit cake.

Oh. Does he have a superiority complex by any chance? He got all *RAWR* when Aura told him to get his paws off her. Which seems to fit in with the theme that the quiet ones end up being the crazy ones. *sigh*

Poor Chris. (haha I keep swapping the names XD)

But damn. How'd he know(where she was)? Was it his 'male powers of intuition' or are we hedging our bets with the 'power of love'? Or option c) He got lucky. Let's just hope he stays lucky O.o

Somebody really needs to wipe that smirk of that smug little catcus' face. And it would be nice if that person was Aura ;D She's not standing up for herself. Not at all. If I was there, I would annoying the hell out of my captor ;P Because I'm like that. And also I would be thinking he wouldn't get a cent if I wasn't, you know alive. (& I'd be voicing that part quite a bit) I'd be bagging out his dad. Most of all I wouldn't give him (Leigh) the satisfaction of seeing me breakdown. I know Aura's a really soft and gentle person, but even in normal situations- she just lets everyone walk all over her. And it affects all aspects of her life. Her relationship with Tynan was a change from that- but the way she ended it, she was up to her usual 'avoiding-confrontations-game-thing' again.

What a little sped. I know I’ve been bagging Leigh out a lot, but he really does deserves it. Pushing the old guy down the stairs? Seriously. This isn’t about his mum and his sister. I don’t it hasn’t been for a while now. I think this is about him dealing out his ‘revenge’ on those who don’t deserve to have such fortunes lives (in his mind at least). This is about him being in power and controlling the situation. Oh, and another stupid thing Leigh did. He didn’t check if the motel manager was alive or not. Silly, silly boy.

P.s Aw, you’re welcome ;D. Of course I enjoyed reading your work! :)