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8/18/2015 c1 Abigail
This is a cool poem i, like and its sorta of creepy
2/2/2009 c1 May Elizabeth
I actually love this. I find it relateable. Some things I suggest:

1."Is that a tear?/Running down my face."

should be "Is that a tear/running down my face?"

2."cant" should be "can't".

3. The second to last stanza has very little punctuation.

4. Some of the stanzas are too large. Break them up into smaller stanzas.

Keep it up. Peace.

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