for Oh God4/9/2009 c1 
11crimson-reverie
gosh i think you hit it spot on. the way it feels...
good job. of course. ha.
11crimson-reveriegosh i think you hit it spot on. the way it feels...
good job. of course. ha.
3/30/2009 c1 2Krerin
I really like this peice and most all of your work that I've read. Good to know ther eis someone on fp that I can relate to!
2KrerinI really like this peice and most all of your work that I've read. Good to know ther eis someone on fp that I can relate to!
2/16/2009 c1 21Tiernan Hunter
Aside from a lack of punctuation, I absolutely adore this poem. The rawness is lovely, and the rhyming is great, as usual.
21Tiernan HunterAside from a lack of punctuation, I absolutely adore this poem. The rawness is lovely, and the rhyming is great, as usual.
2/2/2009 c1 989East-0f-Eden
WOW! This is more graphic than anything I write on this site. I do write this type of poem but keep it between my bf and I. Kudos for you for having the moxy to put it up.
989East-0f-EdenWOW! This is more graphic than anything I write on this site. I do write this type of poem but keep it between my bf and I. Kudos for you for having the moxy to put it up.