
2/6/2009 c1
2Solielle
It's nice. Good writing style. Thoug, you might want to use line spaces to separate paragraphs, just so your story's not bunched up and it's easier to read. :)

It's nice. Good writing style. Thoug, you might want to use line spaces to separate paragraphs, just so your story's not bunched up and it's easier to read. :)
2/5/2009 c1 ForTheLoveOfWords
Ahh, this sounds pretty cool. I hope that you keep updating. I'm curious as to where you will go with this. C:
Ahh, this sounds pretty cool. I hope that you keep updating. I'm curious as to where you will go with this. C: