for Eyes Screaming Profanities2/5/2009 c1 
33Sit In Solemn Silence
this was a great poem. you have a very nice rhythm. I really liked the last line, it holds a lot of truth and a touch of sweetness. I also liked the 'revolving around each others current" line. also liked... ok lets just leave it at i LOVED the entire poem before this comment gets to long! good job, cheers!
33Sit In Solemn Silencethis was a great poem. you have a very nice rhythm. I really liked the last line, it holds a lot of truth and a touch of sweetness. I also liked the 'revolving around each others current" line. also liked... ok lets just leave it at i LOVED the entire poem before this comment gets to long! good job, cheers!