7/21/2009 c1 17Unique1952
This is so sweet, and sad, and just good!
I'm going to have to go to the next story now and read more!
I must admit that I was a little confused with the bold print at first, but I understand now.
Nice work with this!
This is so sweet, and sad, and just good!
I'm going to have to go to the next story now and read more!
I must admit that I was a little confused with the bold print at first, but I understand now.
Nice work with this!
3/3/2009 c1 3Geminiwriter93
Wow, I'm really slow, I just figured it out tonight that you had this story up. I absolutely love it! I can't wait for you to work on it again, I'm excited to find out Sam's reaction. Lol I love how oblivous Darlene is that Sam is in love with her lol. Can't wait for your next chapter!
Wow, I'm really slow, I just figured it out tonight that you had this story up. I absolutely love it! I can't wait for you to work on it again, I'm excited to find out Sam's reaction. Lol I love how oblivous Darlene is that Sam is in love with her lol. Can't wait for your next chapter!
2/18/2009 c1 XxRealGirlxX
Omg. Wow. So gud! Im hoping for more soon, bt ur right, mhb is ur priority, and plus, its my favourite story on fp.:)
Omg. Wow. So gud! Im hoping for more soon, bt ur right, mhb is ur priority, and plus, its my favourite story on fp.:)
2/8/2009 c1 nzgurl
Oh, I'm liking this story, it's a good idea to write it!
Can't wait for the nxt chapter :)
Oh, I'm liking this story, it's a good idea to write it!
Can't wait for the nxt chapter :)
2/7/2009 c1 Amora Lee
Oh.Em.Gee. I did NOT (times like a kabillion) see that coming. But I'm so glad that you're writing this story! Update soon!
Oh.Em.Gee. I did NOT (times like a kabillion) see that coming. But I'm so glad that you're writing this story! Update soon!
2/7/2009 c1 Sacred flower
OMG...so this means that davids older brother is not Sams son...I think...but omg...I can't wait for the next chapter...oh and I can't wait for the next chapter in MHB...
OMG...so this means that davids older brother is not Sams son...I think...but omg...I can't wait for the next chapter...oh and I can't wait for the next chapter in MHB...
2/6/2009 c1 breathless74
i really like it... if it was a stand alone story i wouldn't have anything to say except 'good start.' however, because this must have happened a while before Megan and David's story, you might want to consider the time period. would they have had cell phones? this chapter just seemed to be a bit too modern.
i really like it... if it was a stand alone story i wouldn't have anything to say except 'good start.' however, because this must have happened a while before Megan and David's story, you might want to consider the time period. would they have had cell phones? this chapter just seemed to be a bit too modern.
2/6/2009 c1 Becky
I love this! I can't wait to read the next chapter! does this mean that Sam and Darlene get married? I'm excited for the update!
I love this! I can't wait to read the next chapter! does this mean that Sam and Darlene get married? I'm excited for the update!