4/13/2009 c1 JuniperRhose
This is very good, and truely emotional, but sometimes the fact that there is only conversation (which I know you mentioned even before I started reading :p) is difficult, if only because I lose track of who is saying what at different times.
Still, well done :)
This is very good, and truely emotional, but sometimes the fact that there is only conversation (which I know you mentioned even before I started reading :p) is difficult, if only because I lose track of who is saying what at different times.
Still, well done :)