for A break from the monotony2/15/2010 c1 
17EliMerriman
Strange to see you do something so sad and serious, but it's not horrible. You've stuck to you simplicity too. A decent shot, I'd say.
17EliMerrimanStrange to see you do something so sad and serious, but it's not horrible. You've stuck to you simplicity too. A decent shot, I'd say.
4/28/2009 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
So true! Great work here, I really loved this one.
Much love,
Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietSo true! Great work here, I really loved this one.
Much love,
Juliet.
2/6/2009 c1 5poet without a purpose
I liked this. :) My only comment would be maybe switching the second and third line? Like:
Your words are so cold
—Like ice—
Then again, I don't know too much about poetry and that's just my opinion. Good job, regardless!
5poet without a purposeI liked this. :) My only comment would be maybe switching the second and third line? Like:
Your words are so cold
—Like ice—
Then again, I don't know too much about poetry and that's just my opinion. Good job, regardless!
2/6/2009 c1 35LittlePieceLove
I'm not used to reading poetry like this that comes from you, but I guess you can make pretty much anything happen.
It's really nice,
Glad I read it. =]
35LittlePieceLoveI'm not used to reading poetry like this that comes from you, but I guess you can make pretty much anything happen.
It's really nice,
Glad I read it. =]