for How to Become a Mother in 270 Days7/23/2010 c1 JenL
WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE?
I feel in love with the first chapter about a while (LONG WHILE)
I think your a great while and i hope you start writing or updating because its so good!
WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE?
I feel in love with the first chapter about a while (LONG WHILE)
I think your a great while and i hope you start writing or updating because its so good!
6/15/2010 c1 tamii
You have GOT to continue this story! Ok, I know there are a lot of stories out there with this kind of plot but I seriously think you have the potential to make it original and something new.
Call me masochistic, but I liked the part where Will and Holly were arguing - especially the last part. It gives you some material to make your characters have more depth. From this initial chapter I've gathered that Will probably has commitment issues and maybe other personal stuff going on.
I'd love it if you decided to continue this story and show what happens between their relationship and Holly's pregnancy. I know Holly seems happy that she's having a baby, but really, who wants to raise a baby alone. And what about when she has morning sickness and back aches etc - I guess she's realise that it'd be nice to have someone there (enter Will, lol.)
So anyway, enough of me babbling on :) I like the direction of this story and I really hope you continue!
You have GOT to continue this story! Ok, I know there are a lot of stories out there with this kind of plot but I seriously think you have the potential to make it original and something new.
Call me masochistic, but I liked the part where Will and Holly were arguing - especially the last part. It gives you some material to make your characters have more depth. From this initial chapter I've gathered that Will probably has commitment issues and maybe other personal stuff going on.
I'd love it if you decided to continue this story and show what happens between their relationship and Holly's pregnancy. I know Holly seems happy that she's having a baby, but really, who wants to raise a baby alone. And what about when she has morning sickness and back aches etc - I guess she's realise that it'd be nice to have someone there (enter Will, lol.)
So anyway, enough of me babbling on :) I like the direction of this story and I really hope you continue!
3/21/2009 c1 Victoria
Very very curious as to what is going to happen with this story. Are you planning on updating, or did you write the first chapter and give up? Really hoping that isnt the case by the way.
Very very curious as to what is going to happen with this story. Are you planning on updating, or did you write the first chapter and give up? Really hoping that isnt the case by the way.