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2/8/2009 c1 SilentNightingale
I like it so far. Hope you update soon!
2/7/2009 c1 7jinx89
I really liked this first chapter! Although, just as constructive criticism...I'm wondering, wouldn't Kayla feel kind of weird that she's being 'shared' in a way? I don't know. That's how I see it. I'm kind of guessing that you'll use that as part of the humor in the story but I can't tell with this. I just thought I'd point out that awkward point. Anyway, keep up the great work!
2/7/2009 c1 2bubublacz
I'm not a good observer, so I didn't really see a mistake unless someone would point it out. I like the story. Can't wait for the next chapters!
2/7/2009 c1 14Kicon
Oh, I totally LUURVE it!

2/7/2009 c1 5Number One Dancing Queen
OMG! This is good so far. Is it going to be like a Love Triangle? Update ASAP!
2/7/2009 c1 quill.and.inkk

I can't wait for the next chapter!
2/7/2009 c1 4Emma Lake
kind of loving this!

very cute.

can't wait for more!

2/7/2009 c1 1funky-gg
I like it. Trenton is my fav :)
2/7/2009 c1 Beksky
I loved this! :)
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