for Valentine's Day2/14/2013 c1 
11TheClassicCriminal
First thought, What the heck, how did they make me irritated even before I opened the story? (Huge description that wasn't actually huge)
Second thought, This person is really hatin V-day... (Obviously)
Third thought, Why did I open this? (Huge description, again)
Fourth, Awwwwwwwww wwww wwww wwwwwwwww *sniffle
11TheClassicCriminalFirst thought, What the heck, how did they make me irritated even before I opened the story? (Huge description that wasn't actually huge)
Second thought, This person is really hatin V-day... (Obviously)
Third thought, Why did I open this? (Huge description, again)
Fourth, Awwwwwwwww wwww wwww wwwwwwwww *sniffle
2/7/2009 c1 105The Exuberant
I didn't really like it until the end. The end made it better.
I was dumped on my b-day, which I think is just as worse :(
Ps. Valentines day hates you too :P
105The ExuberantI didn't really like it until the end. The end made it better.
I was dumped on my b-day, which I think is just as worse :(
Ps. Valentines day hates you too :P
2/7/2009 c1 19Zoey McCusker
Okay, I was thinking all through this about how I could say you should be less synical or more open, but then I felt guilty for thinking all that when I read the last two lines... so, yes, I do sympathize with you on what happened.
:(
But anywho, the message was clear but the rhyming seemed very strained, but then again, it was more leaning towards free verse, right?
Anyways, I liked it.
19Zoey McCuskerOkay, I was thinking all through this about how I could say you should be less synical or more open, but then I felt guilty for thinking all that when I read the last two lines... so, yes, I do sympathize with you on what happened.
:(
But anywho, the message was clear but the rhyming seemed very strained, but then again, it was more leaning towards free verse, right?
Anyways, I liked it.