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2/17/2009 c1 44Stiff Spines
That was so sad. I loved the rhyming.
2/16/2009 c1 5poet without a purpose
This was cute. :) I really liked it.
2/16/2009 c1 21Tiernan Hunter
So sad! The rhyming adds a lot to this, as always, but the rhythm is kind of weird in the first stanza. Otherwise, this is a beautiful valentine's story.
2/12/2009 c1 25Silent Tone
Very nice. It flows well, and I think a lot of people, including me, can relate.

"Each day I sit there in the silence,

And wish it could be broken"

I love those lines. :)
2/11/2009 c1 173Little girl Big world
This is such a cute poem!
2/8/2009 c1 15WiccanGypsy
This is really sweet
2/7/2009 c1 35LittlePieceLove
Exactly my problem.

Glad you wrote this

Glad I read it. ;)

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