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10/17/2012 c1 15newsoulz
This oneshot was so adorable! I loved the interactions between Clark and Elizabeth: their cute conversations made me smile the entire time I was reading. Elizabeth's voice was super funny and engaging, and you put an original spin on the idea of a kissing booth bringing two people together. It seemed a little unrealistic that Elizabeth wouldn't have even considered the possibility that Clark liked her, but despite that, your story was absolutely lovely.
9/22/2012 c1 Alice in Wanderland
Hahaha, this story is so funny! I love how they have all this history; it makes them seem so real! I think my favorite part was how Elizabeth actually dreamed about Clark ruining her sales career because of that exhange thing!
9/18/2012 c1 heal me forever
dis is freaking cute nd awesum love clark ;)
8/9/2012 c1 Fija
I. Loved. This.
8/7/2012 c1 719Dill Wilson
:)
7/1/2012 c1 13youngin-matomon
This was a cute oneshot. It was okay :)
6/30/2012 c1 Guest
Oh my god this is such a cute and perfect one-shot! Ahhh! Great job on it!
6/30/2012 c1 3fellintothemoon
Hello! This is Melissa from the site A Drop of Romeo! Just stopping by to say that your story has been added to our site under the On-Shot category! Here's your review:

Melissa Thinks: Many of us know that sometimes young boys will harrass the girl that they like in order to get their attention. That's exactly what this cute one shot is about. Elizabeth is a born saleswoman. While other kids her age were making fingerpaintings and playing foursquare, she was busy thinking up new ways to make a quick buck. And with that came Clark Robertson, the boy who she considers the bane of her existence, who always seems to get the best of her by frequently buying and returning items. This creates a love/hate type of scenario between the two main characters.

The plot line of this story is unique and stands out from other one shots I've read. Elizibeth and Clark's interactions are funny, cute, and can't help but make you squeal. It's a long enough read so that it keeps you satisfied without making you bored. Ravina for sure distinguishes her one shot from the rest with her distinct voice and the amusing banter she's encorperated between her characters.
6/2/2012 c1 dreeming
Haha, omg, this is so cute!
5/3/2012 c1 An
Aww so cute! I loved it :D
4/17/2012 c1 flawlessimperfectionsx
Awww, this is absolutely adorable. Brilliant idea and amazing writing! A cute, fluffy masterpiece. LOVE IT.
3/19/2012 c1 ClosetReader
Soooo cute! Loved it!
1/29/2012 c1 Rosedreamer101
this is so cutee :D
1/17/2012 c1 halamadrid
Love it!
12/30/2011 c1 Casper Hauntelle
I need to inhale ice creams more often, if you say it's possible to get story ideas out of them.

Awesome awesome story!
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