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7/6/2009 c1 17Unique1952
I love the imagery in this piece. You're very talented with expression through words, nice work.
3/2/2009 c1 612simpleplan13
"And every time, I bid you adieu/My sacred ritual that I perform"... this sounded awkward. I feel like the word that shouldn't be there.

Your punctuation is a bit all over. I would either use it uniformly, grammatically or not at all.

When I read the title, I didn't think I would like the piece. It seemed very cliched. However, when I read it I liked it a lot. The rhyming works well and the tone of the language with words like whilst was great. Your rose imagery was unique and incorporating the seasons was a nice touch.

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