
4/28/2009 c1
1k+Faithless Juliet
Great storytelling flare in this; I liked how whimsical it read. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.

Great storytelling flare in this; I liked how whimsical it read. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.
4/5/2009 c1 BBQ Juice
i love how its a story and how every 2 lines rhyme. it keeps you guessing, and it intresting. title describes poem perfectly.
when people work together, many things are posible.
i love how its a story and how every 2 lines rhyme. it keeps you guessing, and it intresting. title describes poem perfectly.
when people work together, many things are posible.
2/9/2009 c1
35MyCookiesNotYours
I gosh I love this! Hey there good job. Again as an unfortunate, or fortunate if you say, I can't seem to find any errors.
But seriously, this is really lovely. Definitely a favorite of mine!

I gosh I love this! Hey there good job. Again as an unfortunate, or fortunate if you say, I can't seem to find any errors.
But seriously, this is really lovely. Definitely a favorite of mine!
2/9/2009 c1
989East-0f-Eden
:D it's very funny. the Quay makes me think of an Irish poem. very funny. you're quite good at humor. did you know that?

:D it's very funny. the Quay makes me think of an Irish poem. very funny. you're quite good at humor. did you know that?