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5/27/2009 c11 kaw97
OK, I really don't get why you don't have more reviewers. Your stories are awesome! There are VERY few good writers on this site - some I have to grit my teeth just to read a few paragraphs before I give up. Anyway, you are one of my favorites.

I have been trying really hard not to start reading unfinished stories, but I gave into temptation this time and now I'm hooked. I'm just glad I read it now instead of a couple of weeks ago. Hopefully you are nearly done with your hiatus?

Anyway, I look forward to the rest of this story and I put you on my alerts.
5/11/2009 c11 3greenestar
This was a good cahpter! I liked how Saida yelled at him. He deserved it! i hope you can work everything out! :)
5/11/2009 c11 Lady R
Hi! I'll be waiting when you get back. I hope things get better for you soon. Take Care!
5/11/2009 c11 1walkonair
I've been reading this story for a while, and I really like it. Your writing isn't polished, but it's still good. I think that you made Ryan and Kayla's breakup a bit too quick, but other than that your plot is nicely organized. Although this will sound weird/stalkerish and I have no idea what's going on in your life, you'll be in my thoughts and prayers simply as 'that CaughtInASimpleGame gal'. I hope everything turns out okay -although real life isn't always like that- and that the hiatus is brief. Good fortune be with you!

Sincerely, Walkonair
5/11/2009 c11 30RockFan
I love it and I hope he kicks Chris's and Hugo's asses! And Johnny is still so hot (sigh).

Time for lunch and POST MORE SOON!
4/25/2009 c10 1utterlyXXXunrequited
EEk. Well, at least we're partially mended. That's better than nothing. But Chris? Really? Not that idiot again. I'm not going to lie, I really want to see some punches thrown. Haha. No worries, I'll just go watch Gladiator to placate my violent needs. Haha.

Great work! I can't wait to see how the rest of the story shapes out! Keep it up!
4/22/2009 c10 3greenestar
I liekd this chapter! And I enjoyed Sophie's snap because that is how I reacted! Good job, can't wait for the update! :)
4/22/2009 c10 Lady R
This was a really good chapter. I love the brother-sister scene, it was very heart-warming, I was close to tears. And I really loved Sophie for telling Ryan off. But what Johnny said was true, he needs to get his act together. And, it did appear too easy for Chris to let Saida off the hook like that. Will definitely keep my eye on that Chris guy.
4/22/2009 c10 30RockFan
Hehe I cheated. I signed in so I could review again. Actually, I signed in to vote in your poll and I had to sign in for that. But, I wanted to announce that I am the first voter!

Okay, back to work (great chapter)
4/22/2009 c10 Rockfan
I love Johnny. I was all ready for him to explode and was ecstatic when he didn't. What a sweetheart! Too bad he's already married and, well, not real.

Hurry with the next chapter.
4/21/2009 c10 NollieMarie
Oh I have more than an eye on him, I got two boots ready. I just know something else is going to go down.
4/16/2009 c9 1utterlyXXXunrequited
Oh. Oh, no he didn't! Haha. Um. My heart is like going a thousand times a minute. Seriously. I just checked my pulse and its like 103/minute. Wow, I like the way you just took his reaction. I was expecting the whole, "I'll help you! I'll save you, my darling in distress!"-thing, but this, this is for realz right here. Seriously, thinking about it, I can understand that sort of reaction completely.

Wow. Just keep up the great work!

PS. I just do what I do. 8)
4/16/2009 c9 Wonderful
"It only took two steps for him to be close enough to grab her face and plant a passionate kiss on her lips."

Does that tell how close they were that he COULD have done that? Or did Ryan actually take 2 steps and kiss Saida.

That confused me a bit..

Also the breakup with Ryan and Kayla was a bit rushed but then again it seems to work.

But the end fight with Ryan and Saida was definitely pushing it, I mean shouldn't Ryan at least help Saida out first? THEN go to their relationship?

Other than those details I'm enjoying the truth finally come out. :)

And Chris is a total asshole.
4/16/2009 c9 Lady R
Oh, that tonsils thing is not fun. My sister has hers removed and it was kinda tough for her. The outpatient procedure turned into a week stay in the hospital. I hope you get better soon!

Well, I'm glad that Ryan was honest with Kayla about the cheating thing. The more it's prolonged the worse it gets. I'm also glad that the secret is out regarding Saida. I just know his disgust with her is just temporary. I feel now this is where the whole story will begin with the two of them. I look forward to seeing how they proceed from here.
4/16/2009 c9 3greenestar
WHAT! JUST LIKE THAT RYAN IS GOING TO GIVE UP! Well that's lame! I think he cool down and let her explain, because if he doesn't, then he's ruined the LAST good thing that will ever happen to him! I don't like him right now.
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