for Wonderwall4/16/2009 c9 rockfan
Okay, so I couldn't log in. But anyway - YAY! I've been waiting forever for this chapter. I'm glad he told Kayla and I'm glad he busted Saida. Oh, wait until (sexy) Johnny finds out.
Hope you're feeling better! Great chapter.
Okay, so I couldn't log in. But anyway - YAY! I've been waiting forever for this chapter. I'm glad he told Kayla and I'm glad he busted Saida. Oh, wait until (sexy) Johnny finds out.
Hope you're feeling better! Great chapter.
4/16/2009 c9 
1Nollie Marie
AH! Don't tell me that recovery isn't fun! I get my tonsils removed in May and while I know it will be painful I want to hear it isn't THAT bad. Great...not looking forward to it now. :(
Can I say about time Kayla went. I mean no offense, but I didn't like her. And I knew that Ryan was going to see Saida at her other job...I only thought though that it was because she was going to do his bacholar party or something...was pretty close considering.
1Nollie MarieAH! Don't tell me that recovery isn't fun! I get my tonsils removed in May and while I know it will be painful I want to hear it isn't THAT bad. Great...not looking forward to it now. :(
Can I say about time Kayla went. I mean no offense, but I didn't like her. And I knew that Ryan was going to see Saida at her other job...I only thought though that it was because she was going to do his bacholar party or something...was pretty close considering.
4/13/2009 c8 california kills
I really like this story. Lame review, I know, but I just wanted to let you know.
I really like this story. Lame review, I know, but I just wanted to let you know.
4/12/2009 c8 1utterlyXXXunrequited
Um. Wow. This is such a great story. All of the characters are just so real. I have to admit I was getting kind of bored reading the same old, jock falls for geek story of FictionPress and when I stumbled across your story, I was so happy that I found it! Your writing style is very mature and I think that the third person omniscient point of view is just perfect for this story. Keep up the great work and I understand that sometimes thick, mature, real stories take longer to write than stereotypical ones.
Thanks for sharing you writing with the world! I love it!
1utterlyXXXunrequitedUm. Wow. This is such a great story. All of the characters are just so real. I have to admit I was getting kind of bored reading the same old, jock falls for geek story of FictionPress and when I stumbled across your story, I was so happy that I found it! Your writing style is very mature and I think that the third person omniscient point of view is just perfect for this story. Keep up the great work and I understand that sometimes thick, mature, real stories take longer to write than stereotypical ones.
Thanks for sharing you writing with the world! I love it!
3/30/2009 c8 Lady R
I hate these gray areas. How can you be mad at Ryan and Saida when the tension between them was been beautifully built up to this point? I'm sad because Ryan has promised himself to another, even if the other may not be the right one for him.
Ryan has to man up and confess what he did to Kayla. Even though I don't like her much, he has to come clean and endure the fall out. Too bad he couldn't break things off with Kayla before being intimate with Saida. But I guess things are never clear cut. Even though it sounds like I'm complaining, this was a very good chapter!
I hate these gray areas. How can you be mad at Ryan and Saida when the tension between them was been beautifully built up to this point? I'm sad because Ryan has promised himself to another, even if the other may not be the right one for him.
Ryan has to man up and confess what he did to Kayla. Even though I don't like her much, he has to come clean and endure the fall out. Too bad he couldn't break things off with Kayla before being intimate with Saida. But I guess things are never clear cut. Even though it sounds like I'm complaining, this was a very good chapter!
3/30/2009 c8 RockFan
You were right - I did love the rest of the chapter! Yay for sex! (did I just sound like a ... you know what?).
Anyway, hope he dumps Kayla. She's not for him. Maybe Kayla could become a dancer and loosen up a little.
I understand what you mean about stories not coming easily so just stick with it and update soon.
You were right - I did love the rest of the chapter! Yay for sex! (did I just sound like a ... you know what?).
Anyway, hope he dumps Kayla. She's not for him. Maybe Kayla could become a dancer and loosen up a little.
I understand what you mean about stories not coming easily so just stick with it and update soon.
3/30/2009 c8 Nollie
I shall wait until the next update! And it good, outside of the cheating bit.
I shall wait until the next update! And it good, outside of the cheating bit.
3/18/2009 c7 RockFan
It's so sad - I feel so bad for Saida. I hope Ryan rescues her soon. And I definitely haven't missed Kayla.
Can't wait to see Johnny beat someone up (LOL).
Update as soon as you can!
It's so sad - I feel so bad for Saida. I hope Ryan rescues her soon. And I definitely haven't missed Kayla.
Can't wait to see Johnny beat someone up (LOL).
Update as soon as you can!
3/17/2009 c7 Lady R
Ohh, I don't like Saida being slapped around. I hope she doesn't let it escalate further. Just because the situation is so complicated with Ryan right now, I hope her brother can be the one to help her out of the situation. I like the fact that you made Jen say what she said as she's more objective and Saida seems to appreciate that more. Can't wait for the next update.
Ohh, I don't like Saida being slapped around. I hope she doesn't let it escalate further. Just because the situation is so complicated with Ryan right now, I hope her brother can be the one to help her out of the situation. I like the fact that you made Jen say what she said as she's more objective and Saida seems to appreciate that more. Can't wait for the next update.
3/17/2009 c7 1Nollie Marie
slow or not, I find it moving just fine. and, lol, I wasn't surprise you to see you update today.
1Nollie Marieslow or not, I find it moving just fine. and, lol, I wasn't surprise you to see you update today.
3/11/2009 c6 3greenestar
And so the plot thickens!
What did she get for her tattoo? Lol. Really good! Update soonish pleasish! lol.
3greenestarAnd so the plot thickens!
What did she get for her tattoo? Lol. Really good! Update soonish pleasish! lol.