
3/11/2009 c6 rockfan
It's getting intense. You must post again soon!
It's getting intense. You must post again soon!
3/11/2009 c6 Nollie
I liked it, it's getting pretty intresting
I liked it, it's getting pretty intresting
3/6/2009 c5
30RockFan
Great, fantastic chapter! I love this chapter and I love Johnny!
I am so glad you got the new (pretty) laptop! Start cranking out more chapters woman!

Great, fantastic chapter! I love this chapter and I love Johnny!
I am so glad you got the new (pretty) laptop! Start cranking out more chapters woman!
2/21/2009 c4 RockFan
Oh, I wish she'd quit! I feel so bad for her! And Kayla is driving me crazy!
Great chapter - can't wait for the next one.
Oh, I wish she'd quit! I feel so bad for her! And Kayla is driving me crazy!
Great chapter - can't wait for the next one.
2/18/2009 c3 RockFan
Holy crapballs - I didn't see that one coming at all! I don't like the idea of her dancing for groping, perverted pigmen! I hope Ryan saves her (he will - I know).
Great chapter. Loving the story.
Holy crapballs - I didn't see that one coming at all! I don't like the idea of her dancing for groping, perverted pigmen! I hope Ryan saves her (he will - I know).
Great chapter. Loving the story.
2/17/2009 c2 Lady R
My husband wants to get a tattoo, but I'm like "I don't know"... However, seeing how Kayla is reacting to it, I think I need to re-think my position (since I've had a bit of a sheltered life myself). Great story BTW. I hope you can get some rest soon and be re-energized for another update soon!
My husband wants to get a tattoo, but I'm like "I don't know"... However, seeing how Kayla is reacting to it, I think I need to re-think my position (since I've had a bit of a sheltered life myself). Great story BTW. I hope you can get some rest soon and be re-energized for another update soon!
2/17/2009 c2
3greenestar
I don't like Kayla. But she is right, tattoos are addicting! lol. This is really good! Can't wait for more! :)

I don't like Kayla. But she is right, tattoos are addicting! lol. This is really good! Can't wait for more! :)
2/17/2009 c1 greenestar
'shared a man-hug' hahaha! lol. sorry that's just too funny! lol. yeah. i really like this story so far! :)
'shared a man-hug' hahaha! lol. sorry that's just too funny! lol. yeah. i really like this story so far! :)
2/17/2009 c2 RockFan
Love it and I adore Saida. Kayla's a little uptight over a tattoo (I think they're sexy). Can't wait for the chapter - hope it's real soon (hint hint).
Love it and I adore Saida. Kayla's a little uptight over a tattoo (I think they're sexy). Can't wait for the chapter - hope it's real soon (hint hint).
2/16/2009 c2 unknownaliases
i'm enjoying your story, especially the characters - vividly drawn and realistic. ryan's angst is palpable. good job. looking forward to more.
i'm enjoying your story, especially the characters - vividly drawn and realistic. ryan's angst is palpable. good job. looking forward to more.