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8/2/2010 c12 Cloudshika
Yay, i likey! Keep it going Thunder :D I don't have anything to critique
7/28/2009 c1 12All Over You
i'm guessing this is about wolves. werewolves? shape shifters? ah i'm going to have to read more :]
7/26/2009 c11 2simplewonders
Haha I thought chapter 10 was funny :) Hail is my favorite!

On to the critque:

- Like the style

- Like the individualized characters (the way each one seems to have a specific personality rather than being just another wolf? *thumbs up*)

- Fun to read

I normally don't like to read these types of stories, but I actually really like this one! Keep writing!
7/4/2009 c3 Sapphire Symphony
Sweet! they get to be claws (i think thats right.) great job!
7/4/2009 c2 Sapphire Symphony
Aww...I love the pups! So adorable.
7/4/2009 c1 Sapphire Symphony
Fantastic! I love it. Great start!
7/4/2009 c11 28NewRevolution
Yay, i love it!

there isn't enough books on this site with animals in, and yours is very well written.

If you have the time maybe you want to check my story out. If not, then i dont mind.

Anyway, kudos on the great story idea and good writing. I will favourite and hope to be seeing more!
4/9/2009 c2 Cloudshika
You know in real life it would be me beating you in most things right? :D jk

you kept the puffball comment -_- thanks

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