for Hidden7/4/2010 c7 
1Foohypink
Thanks for the chapter I love peter and story I think they make a good romantic couple even if they are not the same species, keep up the good work and please review soon!
1FoohypinkThanks for the chapter I love peter and story I think they make a good romantic couple even if they are not the same species, keep up the good work and please review soon!
7/3/2010 c7 Kuraru-tenshi
I got so happy when I saw an update that I had to read it immediately! I love this story and I love how Peter's hair expresses his emotions or/and what he feels, and I'd love it if Story and Peter ended together.
Good job with this story and I wish you much luck!
I got so happy when I saw an update that I had to read it immediately! I love this story and I love how Peter's hair expresses his emotions or/and what he feels, and I'd love it if Story and Peter ended together.
Good job with this story and I wish you much luck!
5/8/2010 c6 littlemissmuffet
hi,
can you please post something more? =))
hi,
can you please post something more? =))
3/21/2010 c6 2KinleyRoe22
In all honesty i didn't like this story at first...and yet i read it all the way to the sixeth chapter and find myself rereading it again...wow you know how to put a hook in a story...i can't wait to see what happens! plz update soon!
2KinleyRoe22In all honesty i didn't like this story at first...and yet i read it all the way to the sixeth chapter and find myself rereading it again...wow you know how to put a hook in a story...i can't wait to see what happens! plz update soon!
3/20/2010 c6 1Foohypink
Oh my god thank you, thank you so much for posting a chapter I been waiting so long. Peter's knowledge and body structure are really intriging. I really want to see what happens when they arrive to peter's planed. I wonder how Story will deal with the difference species and their own rules and costums. She must be really scare I know I would if I was in her position. I'll be waiting for the next chapter so update soon please.
1FoohypinkOh my god thank you, thank you so much for posting a chapter I been waiting so long. Peter's knowledge and body structure are really intriging. I really want to see what happens when they arrive to peter's planed. I wonder how Story will deal with the difference species and their own rules and costums. She must be really scare I know I would if I was in her position. I'll be waiting for the next chapter so update soon please.
3/7/2010 c5 Kuraru-tenshi
Oh God. I hope you update this story soon! I'm dying to know what happens next, and why he reacted that way (I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one) but most of all, I find this story one of the best if not THE best I've ever read. Everything is so well done! This is a story that I could read over and over and not get tired of it, ever.
Oh God. I hope you update this story soon! I'm dying to know what happens next, and why he reacted that way (I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one) but most of all, I find this story one of the best if not THE best I've ever read. Everything is so well done! This is a story that I could read over and over and not get tired of it, ever.
10/12/2009 c5 Mo- The Reviewer
Woah. This is definately a story like no other!
Although, it does kinda give me the creeps at some parts of the story... :/
~Mo~
Woah. This is definately a story like no other!
Although, it does kinda give me the creeps at some parts of the story... :/
~Mo~
10/11/2009 c5 Foohypink
Thanks for this chapter I've been waiting so long for this. update soon please.
Thanks for this chapter I've been waiting so long for this. update soon please.
6/4/2009 c4 big foot
hi, this is a really weird story,very origional,i look foreward to each new chapter you post. its very good,please update soon with longer chapters maybe, if you have the time? have a great day! :)
hi, this is a really weird story,very origional,i look foreward to each new chapter you post. its very good,please update soon with longer chapters maybe, if you have the time? have a great day! :)
6/2/2009 c1 Mirabella
I really really like your opening paragraph! I totally agree with it and it's well written and thought provoking. Well done!
I really really like your opening paragraph! I totally agree with it and it's well written and thought provoking. Well done!