for Just Don't Fall In Love5/8/2016 c34 Guest
Hi, read this and Michael and Paul's sequel and have to ask, what happened to Neil? Is he still singing? Still in touch with his brother?
Hi, read this and Michael and Paul's sequel and have to ask, what happened to Neil? Is he still singing? Still in touch with his brother?
7/26/2015 c1 Guest
Oops, posted before I was done with my comment. Here's the rest: I LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS! Completely had me from beginning till the end. I could totally relate to Holly (and a part of me to Tina as well ;) and liked the realism in it with the loads of alcohol and not forgetting about the hangovers that follow. It felt real and people are not perfect nor predictable. Great job on this story. Wish I knew how to support and thank the author for creating this. 3
Oops, posted before I was done with my comment. Here's the rest: I LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS! Completely had me from beginning till the end. I could totally relate to Holly (and a part of me to Tina as well ;) and liked the realism in it with the loads of alcohol and not forgetting about the hangovers that follow. It felt real and people are not perfect nor predictable. Great job on this story. Wish I knew how to support and thank the author for creating this. 3
7/26/2015 c1 Guest
I LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS! Completely had me from beginning till the end. I could totally relate to Holly (and a part of me to Tina as well ;) and liked the realism in it with the loads of alcohol and not forgetting about the hangovers that follow. It felt real and people are not perfect or predictable
I LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS! Completely had me from beginning till the end. I could totally relate to Holly (and a part of me to Tina as well ;) and liked the realism in it with the loads of alcohol and not forgetting about the hangovers that follow. It felt real and people are not perfect or predictable
5/11/2015 c32 Guest
i love michael so much
i love michael so much
9/19/2014 c33 pauper333
Poor girl. Holly was obviously desperately desperate for him, I pity her a bit. I still dont think he deserved her but well thats how it is. Its kind of like an abusive relationship without the abuse of course. Or like getting addicted to drugs, trying to stop cause you know it isnt good for you but going back to it again, lol the irony. But yeah In my opinion i dont think whatever they had was healthy and despite having a pov for dan, I didnt feel the slightest sympathy from him. I just felt like he wasnt ready for a relationship at all. And that holly had to love herself a bit more. I think their both not ready to love, most especially dan but thats just my opinion of course. It kinda hurt to see a person like holly who youd look at once and think gosh this girl needs to know that she is pretty and that she deserves to be treated right and to love herself. But good job for this story, its hard enough to make a oneshot but to make one with 30 plus chapters. Nice:)
Poor girl. Holly was obviously desperately desperate for him, I pity her a bit. I still dont think he deserved her but well thats how it is. Its kind of like an abusive relationship without the abuse of course. Or like getting addicted to drugs, trying to stop cause you know it isnt good for you but going back to it again, lol the irony. But yeah In my opinion i dont think whatever they had was healthy and despite having a pov for dan, I didnt feel the slightest sympathy from him. I just felt like he wasnt ready for a relationship at all. And that holly had to love herself a bit more. I think their both not ready to love, most especially dan but thats just my opinion of course. It kinda hurt to see a person like holly who youd look at once and think gosh this girl needs to know that she is pretty and that she deserves to be treated right and to love herself. But good job for this story, its hard enough to make a oneshot but to make one with 30 plus chapters. Nice:)
7/28/2014 c9 
2auroraglider
Oh I hope Dan realizes he was wrong about Holly being there for Michael before it is too late.
2auroragliderOh I hope Dan realizes he was wrong about Holly being there for Michael before it is too late.
7/27/2014 c6 auroraglider
this chapter was sweet but I kept waiting for Dan to maybe go in and shower. I guess I kinda hoped that they would have gotten together.
this chapter was sweet but I kept waiting for Dan to maybe go in and shower. I guess I kinda hoped that they would have gotten together.
6/13/2013 c33 AKhwab
I like your ending though I wonder about Dylan. What will happen between Holly and Dylan? She has come across as super unprofessional lately. Insert pout here
I like your ending though I wonder about Dylan. What will happen between Holly and Dylan? She has come across as super unprofessional lately. Insert pout here
6/12/2013 c16 AKhwab
I like how you made the scene real. Cos it's not all the time that people release together . So yeah... good job :) did Dan really hear her?
I like how you made the scene real. Cos it's not all the time that people release together . So yeah... good job :) did Dan really hear her?