for Birthright9/7/2011 c15 xxxreviewerxxx
Hello,
I know your busy and have writer's block, but I want to know what happens to Rhia and Marcus. I especially would like to know what caused Marcus to think so little of Rhia.
So pretty please with a cherry on top, update.
Thank you :)
Hello,
I know your busy and have writer's block, but I want to know what happens to Rhia and Marcus. I especially would like to know what caused Marcus to think so little of Rhia.
So pretty please with a cherry on top, update.
Thank you :)
9/7/2011 c15 Evenstar1389
omgg this is super duper exciting! I just had to read it after seeing the summary, even though I knew i probably wont be able to read its completion :/
Im glad that it's not the overused werewolves supernatural story, and it looks like there is a huge background there just waiting to be uncovered. But in the beginning of the story when the four siblings were introduced and I read the summary that says that Marcus and Rhia were the protagonists i felt super weirddd... until more of the adopted background was explained of coz. Marcus and Lillian are so mean to her! And after he imprinted on her he starts treating her nicer? way to get into her pants :/
I really hope u'd get back to this story one day. Meanwhile im putting it on storyalert so that i can re-read it if it does continue on =)
omgg this is super duper exciting! I just had to read it after seeing the summary, even though I knew i probably wont be able to read its completion :/
Im glad that it's not the overused werewolves supernatural story, and it looks like there is a huge background there just waiting to be uncovered. But in the beginning of the story when the four siblings were introduced and I read the summary that says that Marcus and Rhia were the protagonists i felt super weirddd... until more of the adopted background was explained of coz. Marcus and Lillian are so mean to her! And after he imprinted on her he starts treating her nicer? way to get into her pants :/
I really hope u'd get back to this story one day. Meanwhile im putting it on storyalert so that i can re-read it if it does continue on =)
3/14/2011 c15 Katie
Is there ANY chance we'll get to see chapter 16? Ever?
Is there ANY chance we'll get to see chapter 16? Ever?
12/7/2010 c15 GOGO
So, u planning on ever updating this awesome story?
So, u planning on ever updating this awesome story?
1/24/2010 c15 
2I Will Not Die I Will Survive
i love this story soo far you have to update soon cause i really really cant wait XD
2I Will Not Die I Will Survivei love this story soo far you have to update soon cause i really really cant wait XD
1/6/2010 c15 MarloCarlo10
Dang Jude's a king!
Wow a huge demon snake...thats awesome.
Sybil must be very important for both of them to protect her and to have this Prince to ask for them to protect her.
Great chap and good fight!
Dang Jude's a king!
Wow a huge demon snake...thats awesome.
Sybil must be very important for both of them to protect her and to have this Prince to ask for them to protect her.
Great chap and good fight!
1/6/2010 c14 MarloCarlo10
I don't see why Lillian blamed Rhia...it really wasn't her fault.
Hahaha I love the fact he's human! It's so crazy but awesome.
I can't wait til we get back to why Sybil is so wanted...or hunted after...although I do love Marcus and Rhia =D
O more Marcus and Rhia action to come =D
I don't see why Lillian blamed Rhia...it really wasn't her fault.
Hahaha I love the fact he's human! It's so crazy but awesome.
I can't wait til we get back to why Sybil is so wanted...or hunted after...although I do love Marcus and Rhia =D
O more Marcus and Rhia action to come =D
12/29/2009 c15 drunkoffwooder
hey, i really hope you update soon! i love this story and want to see their feelings develop :)
hey, i really hope you update soon! i love this story and want to see their feelings develop :)
11/18/2009 c15 1HeartsOfDiamonds
Great story so far. It's alot like Twilight, but has a bit of a twist. However, at least it's not about vampires as I'm so sick of them. Update soon please.
1HeartsOfDiamondsGreat story so far. It's alot like Twilight, but has a bit of a twist. However, at least it's not about vampires as I'm so sick of them. Update soon please.
11/1/2009 c15 5Sure as the Dawn
Oh don't worry! This chapter was really good. It focused on other characters and had some nice action too it. No fillers or useless stuff. Perfect ;)
5Sure as the DawnOh don't worry! This chapter was really good. It focused on other characters and had some nice action too it. No fillers or useless stuff. Perfect ;)
10/13/2009 c15 2sunshinernnr
I never would have guessed that Jude was a good guy in this one (at least that's what I'm assuming now)! Is Jude Prince Raziel?
This chapter really had a lot going on. I couldn't keep it all straight. I'm guessing Lillian's disappearance into an upstairs bedroom with a human will be significant in some way.
2sunshinernnrI never would have guessed that Jude was a good guy in this one (at least that's what I'm assuming now)! Is Jude Prince Raziel?
This chapter really had a lot going on. I couldn't keep it all straight. I'm guessing Lillian's disappearance into an upstairs bedroom with a human will be significant in some way.
10/12/2009 c15 21rosieroo
wow. this is getting so interesting! as much as i love reading about rhia and marcus, this was still awesome! cant wait for the next chappie!
21rosieroowow. this is getting so interesting! as much as i love reading about rhia and marcus, this was still awesome! cant wait for the next chappie!
10/12/2009 c15 13Tsumujikaze no Soujutsu
I do think that this is one of your best, if not the best chapter you've done here. Quite frankly it's not a good move for the plot focus to be limited to the main characters, so I'm pretty much glad that you actually did a chapter on Jude and Vivi. To be very frank though I think you could have done more on their characters since most of the stuff I've seen here are pretty much action based with not anything much being done on their character explorations. As for Sybil, to be very frank if you want to make her into a vital character, you should try to work more on her character exploration and developments in the future. But this chapter did open up a new possibility in the plotline, so it's a good thing here. :)
P.S: New chapter for The Eternal Grail is already up. Hope to see your review for it soon. :)
13Tsumujikaze no SoujutsuI do think that this is one of your best, if not the best chapter you've done here. Quite frankly it's not a good move for the plot focus to be limited to the main characters, so I'm pretty much glad that you actually did a chapter on Jude and Vivi. To be very frank though I think you could have done more on their characters since most of the stuff I've seen here are pretty much action based with not anything much being done on their character explorations. As for Sybil, to be very frank if you want to make her into a vital character, you should try to work more on her character exploration and developments in the future. But this chapter did open up a new possibility in the plotline, so it's a good thing here. :)
P.S: New chapter for The Eternal Grail is already up. Hope to see your review for it soon. :)
10/10/2009 c15 Summer Leah
I feel so bad for Rhia! When Marcus was upset that even she could beat him now, I wanted her to say 'now you know what it feels like' or just at some point offer to leave since she's obviously unwanted and the weakest link. except that Cam does want her around. But Lillian is a bitch.
I'd also just LOVE some more smexin'!
Anyhoo, please update soon!
I feel so bad for Rhia! When Marcus was upset that even she could beat him now, I wanted her to say 'now you know what it feels like' or just at some point offer to leave since she's obviously unwanted and the weakest link. except that Cam does want her around. But Lillian is a bitch.
I'd also just LOVE some more smexin'!
Anyhoo, please update soon!