2/17/2009 c1 MaeLikesPoptarts
This was very well written, minus a spelling error or two.

Notably... "reign" not "rein" is what I think you were going for?

I really enjoyed this part as well:

"Throwing their lives away

In the pursuit of something

so delicate in nature

A hazy concept

unfocused and ephemeral in existence

Taking years to be built

upon a wobbly foundation of war"

The imagery in this is subtle, but enjoyable.

I rather enjoy reading all of your poetry.

Well done, kudos.

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