for Hypothetically, Of Course6/25/2009 c7 
11dreamercrys
Why does she have to be so mean to him? Its not his fault... Bella is the one that kept it from him and Lea needs to understand that and give him a chance... Poor guy...
I don't know if you realize this but sometimes you write Lea's name when you mean Bella and Bella's name when you mean Lea... It gets a little confusing sometimes and wasn't sure if you knew about it or not...
Can't wait for more!
11dreamercrysWhy does she have to be so mean to him? Its not his fault... Bella is the one that kept it from him and Lea needs to understand that and give him a chance... Poor guy...
I don't know if you realize this but sometimes you write Lea's name when you mean Bella and Bella's name when you mean Lea... It gets a little confusing sometimes and wasn't sure if you knew about it or not...
Can't wait for more!
6/13/2009 c6 1Writing4Eternity
This chapter was ok. You have some grammatical errors and common mistakes such as:
Lea swiped the tears from her face in a heated measure, and stomped out of the door, angry.
I think you meant Bella because Lea had already left by this point.
Lance sighed and called after her, gently, with no response
PLEASE PUT PERIODS AT THE END OF YOUR SENTNCES.
1Writing4EternityThis chapter was ok. You have some grammatical errors and common mistakes such as:
Lea swiped the tears from her face in a heated measure, and stomped out of the door, angry.
I think you meant Bella because Lea had already left by this point.
Lance sighed and called after her, gently, with no response
PLEASE PUT PERIODS AT THE END OF YOUR SENTNCES.
6/11/2009 c6 11dreamercrys
Ah... they are all way to emotional... They just need to sit down and talk it all out... Can't wait for more!
11dreamercrysAh... they are all way to emotional... They just need to sit down and talk it all out... Can't wait for more!
6/11/2009 c6 Spanishfly69
You are just WRONG on so many levels for ending that chapeter like that...
Kind of mad that Lea assume/thinks Lance knew about her along when that is so not the case. Mad that Isla can't think that what she was thinking as a 17 yr old is really not ideal for two adults...
This is a mess... I want to see where you go from here cause it should be very interesting... You have me waiting on the edge of my seat chica!
UPDATE WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!
You are just WRONG on so many levels for ending that chapeter like that...
Kind of mad that Lea assume/thinks Lance knew about her along when that is so not the case. Mad that Isla can't think that what she was thinking as a 17 yr old is really not ideal for two adults...
This is a mess... I want to see where you go from here cause it should be very interesting... You have me waiting on the edge of my seat chica!
UPDATE WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!
6/2/2009 c5 Spanishfly69
Ok so I accidentally found this story...
That is one SMART A$$ cookie of a 16 yr old! She has already put all the clues together... I feel bad for Lance... Isla should have told him he was going to be a father...
In a real world, finding out your mom never told the man he was going to be a dad and having him find out at the same time his daughter figured it out would lead to some very rocky confrontations between mother and child...
I seriously want Isle to feel uncomfortable... They were 17 and 18 respectively it seems like she is still acting that age now... *sigh*
Can't wait to read what you have in store...
Ok so I accidentally found this story...
That is one SMART A$$ cookie of a 16 yr old! She has already put all the clues together... I feel bad for Lance... Isla should have told him he was going to be a father...
In a real world, finding out your mom never told the man he was going to be a dad and having him find out at the same time his daughter figured it out would lead to some very rocky confrontations between mother and child...
I seriously want Isle to feel uncomfortable... They were 17 and 18 respectively it seems like she is still acting that age now... *sigh*
Can't wait to read what you have in store...
4/20/2009 c1 Divisionred
Hi please update the story...I know that you are almost finished with finals... as soon as they are done, once you catch yout breath, please update. Thanks
Hi please update the story...I know that you are almost finished with finals... as soon as they are done, once you catch yout breath, please update. Thanks
4/19/2009 c4 blazingstar1994
haha. this is really awesome so far! but what i'm confused about is who is the romance going to be with. but overall, i really like this, and i'm getting really into it.
haha. this is really awesome so far! but what i'm confused about is who is the romance going to be with. but overall, i really like this, and i'm getting really into it.
4/4/2009 c4 slasherr
I COMMAND YOU TO UPDATE RIGHT NOW AT THIS EXACR SECOND!(or at least like tommorow)
I COMMAND YOU TO UPDATE RIGHT NOW AT THIS EXACR SECOND!(or at least like tommorow)
4/3/2009 c5 Divisionred
Sputter what...you left it there...well where is the rest of the story? Update, update...waiting...thanks
Sputter what...you left it there...well where is the rest of the story? Update, update...waiting...thanks
4/2/2009 c5 bwilkins
No, it was not way too long and I could never get bored with this one! I was on the edge of my chair the whole time! Please update soon, please!
No, it was not way too long and I could never get bored with this one! I was on the edge of my chair the whole time! Please update soon, please!
4/1/2009 c5 g
Isla was wrong but I'm not taking too kindly to Lance trying to blame Isla for EVERYTHING. He hurt her bad and she was a kid and acted on her emotions. A mistake, yeah, but she made it. Lea is already gonna have issues with Isla over this I hope he doesn't purposefully make those worse, b/c his feelings were hurt.
Isla was wrong but I'm not taking too kindly to Lance trying to blame Isla for EVERYTHING. He hurt her bad and she was a kid and acted on her emotions. A mistake, yeah, but she made it. Lea is already gonna have issues with Isla over this I hope he doesn't purposefully make those worse, b/c his feelings were hurt.