for Hypothetically, Of Course4/1/2009 c5 intellectual titmouse
interesting continuation. isla's pretty hardcore in holding onto that grudge. she's gotta see at some point that they were young and not-so-bright. i like lea though. part 2 better come up soon!
interesting continuation. isla's pretty hardcore in holding onto that grudge. she's gotta see at some point that they were young and not-so-bright. i like lea though. part 2 better come up soon!
3/19/2009 c4 
1HumorMe
I love love love this story, I can't wait to see where you take it. I am excited that the characters seem so real, they curse, they f*ck, they do it all. I am excited. Oh I am not too excited about the experimentation phase that Isla went through that her best friend is mentioning. Few words, throws of my character perception of her.
1HumorMeI love love love this story, I can't wait to see where you take it. I am excited that the characters seem so real, they curse, they f*ck, they do it all. I am excited. Oh I am not too excited about the experimentation phase that Isla went through that her best friend is mentioning. Few words, throws of my character perception of her.
3/15/2009 c4 intellectual titmouse
awesome build-up. i like both lea and her mom's attitude and dialogue, though she is a bit man-hating which can be annoying. so far, pretty realistic characters. can't wait for more!
awesome build-up. i like both lea and her mom's attitude and dialogue, though she is a bit man-hating which can be annoying. so far, pretty realistic characters. can't wait for more!
3/14/2009 c4 bwilkins
I think the pace your are moving at is perfect. This story rocks! More please and soon!
I think the pace your are moving at is perfect. This story rocks! More please and soon!
3/6/2009 c4 slasherrr
wowzers (i have a bad habit of saying that) every single day i check to see if you've updated this because its soo addicting! and i never ever review for a story but this one i just had to make an exception!
wowzers (i have a bad habit of saying that) every single day i check to see if you've updated this because its soo addicting! and i never ever review for a story but this one i just had to make an exception!
3/5/2009 c4 Ana
HE CALLED HER! What a great way to end a chapter. Now I have to wait for the next one. I guess that goods because when I see that you updated I will be excited. I like the progression of the plot so far. You're doing great. ^.~
~Ana~
HE CALLED HER! What a great way to end a chapter. Now I have to wait for the next one. I guess that goods because when I see that you updated I will be excited. I like the progression of the plot so far. You're doing great. ^.~
~Ana~
3/5/2009 c4 4toonmili
Hey I'm really enjoying this story. Lance's parts are the most interesting though.
And did you ever think about chnaging your review settings, right now you only take signed reviews and that can be a deterant.
4toonmiliHey I'm really enjoying this story. Lance's parts are the most interesting though.
And did you ever think about chnaging your review settings, right now you only take signed reviews and that can be a deterant.
3/3/2009 c4 1BerriesBam
Im nott going to liee.
i LOVE your storry
ur writting reminds me of my favorite writter Zoey Dean,
reall classy and unique.
pluss i love interacial storiess.
keep writting
as well i cant wait to c whats happening with lea and the curasso kid.
=]] yummy
1BerriesBamIm nott going to liee.
i LOVE your storry
ur writting reminds me of my favorite writter Zoey Dean,
reall classy and unique.
pluss i love interacial storiess.
keep writting
as well i cant wait to c whats happening with lea and the curasso kid.
=]] yummy
2/28/2009 c3 Philly Girl1
I like your intro; it certainly made me want to keep reading. One thing I'd like to see is more of Lea's character/personality. Right now she comes across as a somewhat privileged brat; there's nothing there to indicate her supposed brilliance. Of course, I definitely want to know more about the missing 16yrs between Lance and Isla. Overall, I'm very interested in where you're going with this...
I like your intro; it certainly made me want to keep reading. One thing I'd like to see is more of Lea's character/personality. Right now she comes across as a somewhat privileged brat; there's nothing there to indicate her supposed brilliance. Of course, I definitely want to know more about the missing 16yrs between Lance and Isla. Overall, I'm very interested in where you're going with this...