for Hypothetically, Of Course2/20/2009 c3 
1BettyBoo
To keep it simple I just want MORE - cant wait to see the moment when Isla clicks that Lance is Lea's teacher, lol! Will be looking forard to that and more!
1BettyBooTo keep it simple I just want MORE - cant wait to see the moment when Isla clicks that Lance is Lea's teacher, lol! Will be looking forard to that and more!
2/20/2009 c3 imansouren
this is a well written chapter, i especially like the way you move between charactors without breaking thought. it flowed in such a way that i could visualise it happening
this is a well written chapter, i especially like the way you move between charactors without breaking thought. it flowed in such a way that i could visualise it happening
2/20/2009 c3 gonefornow
Very intriguing, I love his reaction at the end of the story. You are a very good writer at your age. Are you a capricorn? I was born in January too. Keep up the good work.
Very intriguing, I love his reaction at the end of the story. You are a very good writer at your age. Are you a capricorn? I was born in January too. Keep up the good work.
2/18/2009 c2 amateur.author
I really like how you didn't drag out lance's epiphany. I was worried there would be a few filler-like chaps while he did, but he didn't and I am still just as intrigued as I was from the first chap. Keep it up. I can't wait for ch. 3!
I really like how you didn't drag out lance's epiphany. I was worried there would be a few filler-like chaps while he did, but he didn't and I am still just as intrigued as I was from the first chap. Keep it up. I can't wait for ch. 3!
2/18/2009 c2 2antisocial extrovert
I really like this story so far; it's really intriguing. Can't wait for the next update.
2antisocial extrovertI really like this story so far; it's really intriguing. Can't wait for the next update.