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5/24/2016 c1 2ChristianGirlNamedChristian
Most definitely!
1/6/2012 c1 287Archia
Oh I like the message behind this and then it's like it's all summed up in the last line. I also like the way you structured it and I think it's quite an effective way to get your point across.
2/20/2009 c1 fleur de l'est
!

I have been trying to say this for ages but haven't figured out how. The paired-up lines are very original and the contrasts work perfectly well. One of the cleverest religious poems I've ever read on fictionpress =)

~fleur

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