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I liked it, i however thought that several of your lines are cliched, but i like the word choice, it deff brings to mind a thunder storm growing darker and more powerful. You could almost feel the beating of the massive drums when rerading this, good job
With all respects
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I liked it, i however thought that several of your lines are cliched, but i like the word choice, it deff brings to mind a thunder storm growing darker and more powerful. You could almost feel the beating of the massive drums when rerading this, good job
With all respects
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