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1/30/2011 c1 4Rainsky
Although very long, this was truly amazing. I loved the detail and creativity, although some parts were rather confusing and probably could have been done better. I can't wait until you add the new POVs, hope fully the story will be even better explained after that!

~Truly fascinated,

Rainsky
6/21/2010 c1 Turtletastic
Holy crap.

I can't believe I finally found this story again. It defies all logic, science, and medical reasoning. Thank you for the many hours of entertainment at the expense of this disgrace to literature. I have discovered several phenomenons through Firecat:

1. Brain dead cats lead the way out of bad situations.

2. If you win against the Underdogs you're turned into a robot, if you lose, you're killed.

3. Roads are reflective. Forget mirrors, just go put makeup on at the asphalt.

4. Voices can kill out your insides.

5. Stampeding buffalo sound like screeching and sirens.

6. Beavers live in holes, not dams.

7. Vultures carry messenger bags.

8. Cracked bowls carry water.

9. Certain types of water can give you supper spechul awesome fire powers.

10. Cats eat cake.

11. Being fire cat is like being president, only better.

12. Cats ride hoover machines.

13. You must state the direction you yell.

14. Tape cures broken bones. Nevermind resetting the injury and putting a cast on it, just pull out a roll of tape.

15. Cats enjoy bathing.

16. The Fire Vulture is the bees knees.

17. You're not a good person, you're a good people.

18. The Fire Cat can use the Jedi Mind Trick.

19. Clouds spell words.

20. Tornadoes solve everything.

Thank you for the many laughs. Your writing makes a true mockery of literature and the English language alike.
6/6/2009 c1 MockingJuliet
First, I wouldn't have made the first chapter quite so long, but other than that, I didn't really catch any mistakes. The discriptions were very well written, as I expected after reading your story "Dark". Again, you are a very talented writer. I enjoyed reading this and I think the idea is very original. I hope you keep writing! You seem like a very promising young writer ^ ^
2/20/2009 c1 4Friedrich Gambino
It's good just wondering, "Dang! Will the first chapter ever end?"
2/20/2009 c1 Bee
hey!

i really liked this story and this idea.

its was really interessting!

your a really good writer!

keep going!

-Bee
2/19/2009 c1 Josh
I think this story needs a lot of work. We can work on this together.

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