4/23/2009 c4 melanie
why did you kill gary? :(
why did you kill gary? :(
2/24/2009 c4 leanna
uhh.. nice story. but i still think you should finish your homework before you write stories -.-
uhh.. nice story. but i still think you should finish your homework before you write stories -.-
2/24/2009 c3 4Blawwmkw
Geez! Finally. I've been trying to review for days but the system's been messed up. Nice chapter. I loved this line: "This is no time to be a friggin' nerd!" Hee hee!
Geez! Finally. I've been trying to review for days but the system's been messed up. Nice chapter. I loved this line: "This is no time to be a friggin' nerd!" Hee hee!
2/21/2009 c4 just a review
i like the ending. its so... hmm, i can't think of the word for it right now, but the ending makes me happy.
i like the ending. its so... hmm, i can't think of the word for it right now, but the ending makes me happy.
2/21/2009 c2 4Blawwmkw
Hahhahh...Leanna is gonna get a good picture of a snail's life! Hopefully she doesn't die in the process...Can't wait for the next two chapters. This is such an original idea!
Hahhahh...Leanna is gonna get a good picture of a snail's life! Hopefully she doesn't die in the process...Can't wait for the next two chapters. This is such an original idea!
2/20/2009 c2 Ashley
love the town name :]
uhh. does the brother eat snails?
sighh. Poor gary, and I guess, Leanna.
love the town name :]
uhh. does the brother eat snails?
sighh. Poor gary, and I guess, Leanna.
2/20/2009 c1 randomdudeofrandomtown
What a waste of salt. Everyone got into a habit of wasting salt... Interesting story so far. I am guessing she turned into a snail as well.
What a waste of salt. Everyone got into a habit of wasting salt... Interesting story so far. I am guessing she turned into a snail as well.