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2/21/2009 c1 lymli
well, the last part has rhyme and the thing about taking risks is great, good poem.
2/20/2009 c1 44Stiff Spines
I liked this. It was very straightforward, but not enough that it was blatantly obvious. I wasn't crazy about the "just deal" part, but I saw you did mention you attempted to rhyme.
2/20/2009 c1 138lael1bologna
I noticed you tried to rhyme, but not all poetry has to rhyme (just wanted to point that out) It was good nonetheless.

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