2/21/2009 c1 lymli
well, the last part has rhyme and the thing about taking risks is great, good poem.
well, the last part has rhyme and the thing about taking risks is great, good poem.
2/20/2009 c1 44Stiff Spines
I liked this. It was very straightforward, but not enough that it was blatantly obvious. I wasn't crazy about the "just deal" part, but I saw you did mention you attempted to rhyme.
I liked this. It was very straightforward, but not enough that it was blatantly obvious. I wasn't crazy about the "just deal" part, but I saw you did mention you attempted to rhyme.
2/20/2009 c1 138lael1bologna
I noticed you tried to rhyme, but not all poetry has to rhyme (just wanted to point that out) It was good nonetheless.
I noticed you tried to rhyme, but not all poetry has to rhyme (just wanted to point that out) It was good nonetheless.