3/1/2009 c1 3L.Bronte
After having read all of your poems, (and that snippet of a story,) this is the piece that I found the most merit in. Each of the others are indiscernible from one another, but I suppose you did write them all.

This piece slightly details why the writer is in so much pain and anguish. It doesn't exhibit the vacant nebulousness that many pieces of teenage poetry do.

This work would be a great platform to grow from.