
8/14/2010 c2
20diwu6398
Wow, you got a ton of reviews on the first chapter! Nice second chapter, I'm guessing that you won't be adding more though? Oh well.

Wow, you got a ton of reviews on the first chapter! Nice second chapter, I'm guessing that you won't be adding more though? Oh well.
6/22/2009 c2
9bluelee
Wow! You really know how to paint word-pictures and draw your readers into a scene. I felt as though I was following your character around. Without taking too much time describing the person and the setting, their rambling (random!) thoughts makes me feel like I know them.

Wow! You really know how to paint word-pictures and draw your readers into a scene. I felt as though I was following your character around. Without taking too much time describing the person and the setting, their rambling (random!) thoughts makes me feel like I know them.
5/15/2009 c2
14FallenAngelFromTheSky
the story is starting out really nice! it's making me laugh (which is a good thing because I needed a laugh. . .. )please update soonER!

the story is starting out really nice! it's making me laugh (which is a good thing because I needed a laugh. . .. )please update soonER!
3/26/2009 c1
8deshaunwalker
omg! you should keep writing this story! it is really awesome... and i hope you decide to keep writing it. update soon!

omg! you should keep writing this story! it is really awesome... and i hope you decide to keep writing it. update soon!
3/15/2009 c1
2HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC
Hey i really liked this you should comtinue wit it.!.
i also wanted 2 say that ur "You Kidnapped me.!." story is AMAZING.!.
Plz update soon and let me know when you start "Save me please"
i think thats what its called
nywaiiz
bye for now and keep up the fantastic work.!.

Hey i really liked this you should comtinue wit it.!.
i also wanted 2 say that ur "You Kidnapped me.!." story is AMAZING.!.
Plz update soon and let me know when you start "Save me please"
i think thats what its called
nywaiiz
bye for now and keep up the fantastic work.!.
3/4/2009 c1 futureauthor852
haha that story seems awesome so far. I can't wait to see what happens even if you don't continue with an actual story line! lol...~Angela
haha that story seems awesome so far. I can't wait to see what happens even if you don't continue with an actual story line! lol...~Angela
2/28/2009 c1 gen
I like it alot... I think it has potential to be a great story. Im curious to see where your going to go with this. You should continue this story for sure!
I like it alot... I think it has potential to be a great story. Im curious to see where your going to go with this. You should continue this story for sure!