for Behind the Sea2/24/2009 c1 
9Narq
I would have reviewed earlier only that fictionpress wouldn't let me log in. I believe you would have had the same issues in the past few days. Anyways, this was really a good little piece though a bit rushed (methinks) and I can see why the teacher enjoyed it as it really looked dep in humanity/human mind and life.
Great work!
Narq.
9NarqI would have reviewed earlier only that fictionpress wouldn't let me log in. I believe you would have had the same issues in the past few days. Anyways, this was really a good little piece though a bit rushed (methinks) and I can see why the teacher enjoyed it as it really looked dep in humanity/human mind and life.
Great work!
Narq.