for Trapped in a Plastic Skin2/25/2009 c1 
17sunday night sky
I love the last stanza... the rhyme works well and it's definitely the perfect ending to the poem. My favourite stanza is this one though:
Criss-cross lines decorate
the inside of her translucent wrists
and starry eyes
betray pretty lies.
Well written (you are not an awful poet!) and interesting imagery. Like it =]
17sunday night skyI love the last stanza... the rhyme works well and it's definitely the perfect ending to the poem. My favourite stanza is this one though:
Criss-cross lines decorate
the inside of her translucent wrists
and starry eyes
betray pretty lies.
Well written (you are not an awful poet!) and interesting imagery. Like it =]